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Topic: Thunder#2
Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Sat 01/26/08 11:53 AM
Comon, carry me Thunder let's ride, forget the stride galloping fast to reach the clouds laughing right out loud as I gasp onto your mane feeling craze, it's all the same I feel the power in your gait take me off in a different place swallowing the wind, that rushes in riding here upon your back let's get going, here's your sugar snack Look at us, pickin up dust as the moon fills the dusk heading down to a stream we camp that night, both with dreams.

lizethmarina Joined Thu 12/20/07 Posts: 229	Sat 01/26/08 11:54 AM
Awesome write, I could actually feel the wind on my face and that sense of freedom forgotten and recently acquired.

fastlinnie Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 1993	Sat 01/26/08 11:54 AM
great

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 01/26/08 12:10 PM
A most calming and beautiful ride

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Sat 01/26/08 12:39 PM
Awesome write, I could actually feel the wind on my face and that sense of freedom forgotten and recently acquired. That's what I like to hear

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Sat 01/26/08 12:40 PM
great thanks

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Sat 01/26/08 12:40 PM
A most calming and beautiful ride (((((((Densie))))))

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Sat 01/26/08 03:53 PM
aww another good one girl

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Sat 01/26/08 04:18 PM
aww another good one girl Why thank you Kristi

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Sun 01/27/08 05:14 AM
great Thanks much for the flower

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sun 01/27/08 05:32 AM
"i like that"

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Sun 01/27/08 09:05 AM
"i like that"

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