Topic: Night Fear
Noden's photo
Tue 01/22/08 10:37 AM
Tearin through the trees
there limbs rippin at me
scrambling, as I fall
the rocks hitting my bones
hidden night, sounds
following my steps
crunching the bed
of the forest floor
eyes searching frantically
stabbin pain within my chest
fingers trying to catch
as I rip into open run
sweat now dripping down
as I feel to find my way
sudden light filled my eyelids
as he stood over me,
rest my dear he's not here
comforting words, he said to she
clinging on for all I could
till the visions left my head
holding me tightly
while I regained my senses
knowing now, I'll be alright
nightmares of distant past
haunting me through the night
thankfully I have you
to put it back into perspective view.

nightimefantasy's photo
Tue 01/22/08 10:43 AM
nicely done



drinker

otterman's photo
Tue 01/22/08 10:44 AM
good poemdrinker

jtitol's photo
Tue 01/22/08 10:44 AM
drinker smokin

Noden's photo
Tue 01/22/08 04:17 PM
Thanks everyone, for your commentsflowerforyou smokin drinker

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 01/22/08 04:40 PM
Humm I could not even begin to imagine those type of
nightmares. :cry:

kc0003's photo
Tue 01/22/08 04:52 PM

Humm I could not even begin to imagine those type of
nightmares. :cry:


me either
hope it was never a reality


LAMom's photo
Tue 01/22/08 08:33 PM
(((( Noden )))))

:cry: My arms wrapping you in warmth,, :heart:

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/22/08 08:45 PM
I hope Ghost is back to ease your pain....so wicked it was.

BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 01/22/08 08:57 PM
Good write,I could almost hear and feel the hot breath on my neck..................I'm in my house on my own.

songstress1's photo
Tue 01/22/08 09:41 PM
Wow...made my heart race..cool write Ali!flowerforyou