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Topic: loneyteardrop
lonelyteardrop's photo
Wed 11/29/06 06:27 PM
it's only been a year
sense friends ask us
to the party, oh
how we laughed,
danced and drink
know one knew
that would be the last,
for going home he lost
control an the spin
we did take!
upside down I remember
them people in blue
asking if we was alright
an telling someone else
what to do, there was screams
trying to come out, and blood
gushing an all I remember then
is one lonely teardrop on his
chin, no words could he speak
and the death angel came
took him away, as the noise got
louder I heard someone say just
another death of a drunk driver
now I have to go on without him
an our wedding bells didn't ring
but when I did hear the church bells
ringing an heard someone say
another drunk driver took another
angel home today, I felt the lonely
teardrop fall from my chin that day
now it's been a year, but the pain
is still there, so through this
lonely teardrop stays

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 11/29/06 06:40 PM
Gawd now that will bring a tear to your eyes
soo sad to lose a loved one so sudden.
Awesome poem tho.

poisonflightledr's photo
Wed 11/29/06 06:40 PM
i truley feel your paine lonley, but it's good that you can find an
outlet to release what is still bottled up in you, and some times that
bottle never runs dry.

well you know where i stand and we already talked a bit. let others
in...when you're ready

catchme_ifucan's photo
Wed 11/29/06 07:09 PM
Big Hugs,girl

When the lost is sitting heavy on you, think of the good things. think
of funny things he did. its good to remember him & its good to cry!!

no photo
Wed 11/29/06 07:49 PM
Lonely,
I am sorry you have this pain. I can understand what you are going threw
.I lost my parents and it is very hard around the holidays. Just
remember that you have friends and if you would like to talk anytime
and I will be here for you to have a should and a ear to listen to you.
May you continue to be strong and just do the best you can and remember
tha great times you had together. He is with you evrywhere you go
because he is in your heart and mind and will never go anywhere eles.

CowgirlLost's photo
Wed 11/29/06 08:01 PM
BIG HUGS for lonleyteardrop!!!!!! :(

lily38's photo
Wed 11/29/06 08:03 PM
Lonelyteardrop; Hey, sweetie. I have been in a similar place w/ a man I
loved and who was ultimately taken suddenly. It has been years, and with
the years comes acceptance and the pain subsides some, but you always
remember and think "what if..." Sometimes it seems so cold, the way the
medical/law professionals are so matter-of-fact. It is their defense
mechanism, I suppose. Doesn't change the fact they were someone very
important to us. Integral parts of our lives and love. I am sorry,
honey. If I can help, please let me know.

Morena350's photo
Wed 11/29/06 08:07 PM
lonely,
I do know how you feel for I to lost my love, the anjel of death took
him away 8 years ago, I found him dead in my bed one day I came home
from work with our 3 years old son, no one heard my scream, when I saw
him lay dead, but still after 8 years, I can hear my scream in my
dreams, it took a long time for me to understand what happened to my
world, I was sad depressed and alone now with my son and in my son I
found the love I lost, but only part of it. For I will never forget that
he was my world, now Im starting to come out and see that there is still
a life to live, and understood that lonelyness was killing me.

morena- the widow

ellgee1976's photo
Wed 11/29/06 08:12 PM
i can't offer anything that anyone else hasn't already, but know that
we're here for ya, if you need an ear, a shoulder, or just a friendly
face

LG

poisonflightledr's photo
Wed 11/29/06 08:16 PM
dam morena u never told me...how tight lip can you be.......

well as long as we'r shearing...

I lost my true soul mate 15 yrs ago to cancer she was 36 i too found
myself alone with two daughter jeniff 5 and allison 4 and a world that
was once right was torn apart, i still cry for her till this day!!!

no photo
Wed 11/29/06 08:23 PM
great poem

no photo
Wed 11/29/06 08:48 PM
ive read it like 5 times and its just ridiculous you are a prodigy of
expression

lonelyteardrop's photo
Thu 11/30/06 12:17 AM
thank you all for writing and sharing

Sometimes I set and the world
seems to move on, I cant sleep
for the nightmares bare on
my tears steam as the river
flows, but only a teardrop
down my cheeks, the real
tears I hide within an
put a smile on and a grin
the pain is there I feel it
every day, my whole life changed
and i'm to blame, for a selfish
kid I was, I through the fit
to join the crowd, I drove him
to his grave, now his far from
me, in heaven looking down,
an I wish just once I could relive
that day, instead of him now in shallow
ground,

no photo
Thu 11/30/06 01:30 AM
WELL, TEARDROP THAT OR THOSE WERE VERY SAD AND FROM YOUR HEART
AND WE ARE FAR APART, BUT IF I WAS THERE WHERE YOU COULD HEAR
I'D AMPLIFY 'MY' FALLING TEAR. IT DOES MAKE YA FEEL AND SEE.
THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOU WITH US...

no photo
Fri 12/22/06 12:31 PM
Through her words here, I like many, felt her pain, and these
words of her's here will always be in my heart to remind me of
a young girl who came through here and shared her heart with all
of us, and became our friend. She is now out of pain, and with her love
once more.. 'Tear' you will be forever missed and never forgotten....

michael1313's photo
Fri 12/22/06 12:35 PM
Amen T...

ellgee1976's photo
Fri 12/22/06 12:36 PM
agreed Iam, she'll never be forgotten

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 12/22/06 02:22 PM
You can never forget once an ANGEL has touched your SOUL!!

catchme_ifucan's photo
Fri 12/22/06 02:28 PM
Blessed be, be seein you around Beka,
(((((((((((((((((((((hugs)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
safe journey my friend..

poisonflightledr's photo
Fri 12/22/06 02:36 PM
Beka, my dear and frigile friend,

You always said to me don't cry but smile, and those words always took
my troubles away.

You had a way of making dark days seem bright, even under the worst
condition possible you always gave of your heart no matter how bruised
it was.

God has called you home now and made you whole again, to walk with him
that you have loved and missed for so long. you have touched my hear in
ways that only you can. I will never forget you my dear friend.

Rick

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