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Staring in the mirror
You contemplate the ways to die Impaled upon the spear You justify your suicide Spread your wings as darkness falls Soar on currents across the sky Close your eyes as the Reaper calls And feel his scythe cut through your side Hear the shadow lover call and heed his glistening lie Feel the songs of lunar halls Forever tugging at the tide Free yourself from earthly chains And hear the contented sigh Die alone out in the rain And seek the infernal ride |
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good wording, bad subject, suicide is never a consideration, there will always be better days
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Days are good for me now, most of these are old poems lol
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Days are good for me now, most of these are old poems lol I am very glad to hear this |
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my wife committed suicide
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xD
This is really good. I reall really like the imagery and emotion in this one..and the rhyme scheme works very well, also. |
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...but I don't think that would quite justify ME committing
suicide.... |
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Edited by
Jess642
on
Mon 03/31/08 02:47 AM
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I like the view on the darkside at times....
and the journey through contemplation is always worth speaking about. |
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