Topic: The Curse
Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 01/04/08 12:46 AM
The Curse

Once I spoke into the night
So tired of tears
And angered at life.
I spoke to take the tears away
And asked that night become my day.
My heart grew hard
And tears had fled
With anger now
I'd made my bed.
My dreams were crushed
And times grew hard
I blamed it all
On life at large.
My friends all feared
In whispers they spoke
Not understanding
What I'd envoked.
The curse I made
I blamed on life
Misunderstanding,
My self made strife.
Deeper into the curse I fled
Until the day I woke up dead.
A voice had spoke unto my heart
And gave me life
A brand new start.
He warned of things
I did not know
He cleaned and scoured
My inner soul.
Now my warning
Felt plain as day
The gift I had
Was squandered away.
And now this lesson
I carry in me
Live your life
With each new day
For curses take
your life away.

Fadedspirit 1/3/08

LAMom's photo
Fri 01/04/08 12:48 AM
Wow,, Simply Wow,,, flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 01/04/08 01:00 AM
:smile: Thanks LAMom...hope that isn't a look of horror there....LOL.

TiffaIrishGirl's photo
Fri 01/04/08 01:01 AM
:cry: flowerforyou Loved it, both the harshness and the beautiful ending...tis life you must learn from the good and the bad...wishing you only beauty and good from now on fadedflowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 01/04/08 01:04 AM
Awwww, thanks Tiff!happy

kc0003's photo
Fri 01/04/08 01:31 AM
very nice...once again

TiffaIrishGirl's photo
Fri 01/04/08 01:38 AM
Tis only the truth:wink: flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 01/04/08 01:43 AM
Thanks again kc....happy