Topic: rate this bio
Vingo's photo
Sat 11/09/24 08:31 PM
overthink too much

Mortman's photo
Mon 11/11/24 10:15 PM
It's an OK profile. The photos are weirdly-lit, the blurb is a mess, and you left the headline as the default "Hi.." It could use a little more work.

The main photo is dim and blurry, but still does an OK job of showing your face. The 3 pics showing you with a phone in front of your face are redundant. I guess you're trying to show off your muscle definition, but you could also do that while showing your face, too. At least lose the two darker ones, since they don't add anything to it. The blue pic of your face is nicely framed, but the blue tint makes it look like you're getting a medical treatment for a skin condition. Or, maybe you're trying hard to look artistic. I don't know.

Then the blurb and headline. Unless you're looking for the kind of woman who doesn't care about intelligence or conversation, you could correct the mess of a paragraph you've got. I mean, It's spelled correctly, but the lack of punctuation is disappointing. Or maybe it's just "hipster." Whatever. Bugs me. Maybe it'll work on the ladies you seek. The headline is where you could craft a few words--just a few, to make you stand out in search results.

Anyway, from the main pic, and the details you included, you seem alright, and many women don't even read the text, so you'll probably do alright. But for the sloppy text and photos that could be a lot better, I'd only rate it 6/10.

Good luck!

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ's photo
Tue 11/12/24 07:52 AM
Good Luck with that portfolio..
Lots of open episode people will be attracted with that..

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