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This is a long story poem...hope you enjoy it.
The Butterfly That Appears As I sit and dream Underneath this big oak tree, I'm in my own world Thinking of you and me. I close my eyes and drift Calming down my fears, Then when I open them A beautiful butterfly appears. She was a Monarch butterfly With wings of orange and black, Designs with laden hearts I was taken aback. She showed no fear as she landed On the top of my bent up knee, I whispered "Hello butterfly, Why is it, you came to me?" Out of the blue I listened As a beautiful voice I heard, "I sensed that you were worried" As she lent an encouraging word. I held up an extended finger For her to perch upon, She crawled up with ease As I looked past the vast beyond. "What do you have to offer me Butterfly with a beautiful voice? I'm ready to listen to you With words I can rejoice." "Let me first begin by saying, My name is Angel, you see, I came because I sensed A lonliness in your plea. For I am a lonely insect That a spell has been cast upon, For I once was a pretty maiden Now my beauty is all gone." "Oh, but I beg to differ" I said "As your majestic wings do show, The perfect heart laden designs As the sun sets them aglow." "But you see," she continued "The heart design is pure, If I can find the right person With these colors I can lure." "Whatever do you mean?" I asked "Please tell me, I'm confused." She continued by saying The more I became amused. "I have to find someone of purity That has love in their heart, Someone that could love only me A love that will never part." "I am in need of love myself For my heart is broke in two, What would it take for me To fall in love with you?" "A kiss between my wings you see A kiss that will be true, For if it is meant to be I will appear upon for you. I will be the pretty maiden Only your eyes will see, The two of us will be together The way love was meant to be." "But I must give you fair warning If the kiss in not true, My beauty will turn horrid And evil befalls upon you. So, if it is in your heart you hear And it's forever to be, The kiss will not be false at all For just that one small fee." I felt something in my heart As I leaned in to kiss her wings, As my lips touched upon her beauty I saw the most wonderous things. Her wings expanded with grace As her body grew long and slender, What appeared unto me Was of joy and splendor. Her beauty was as her name applied An angel so did appear, The pretty maiden she said she was That took away my fear. "Your love is true," she said "As you can actually see, My love is forever yours And we will always be." A butterfly appeared that day It wasn't in my dream, She was a beautiful apparition With a beautiful color scheme. The spell upon her is broken There is no more orange and black, We walk off hand in hand There is no looking back. |
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OMG that is so beautiful, it should be in a book, how long did that take for you to write it???!!!!!
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That was so beautiful, the words pulled me in and I was whisked to that spot. Beautiful honey.
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Your a lucky woman Songstress
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Beautiful poem wolfeyes. I have often thought my mom sends me butterflies, so you have touched my heart with that poem.
Thank you |
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butterflies are gentle precious beautiful God's gifts...that was such a beautiful poem wolf eyes thank you for sharing
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Your a lucky woman Songstress |
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OMG that is so beautiful, it should be in a book, how long did that take for you to write it???!!!!! Believe it or not, just this morning. The words just come to me. Thanks for your comment. It feels good when given that kind of comment. |
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That was so beautiful, the words pulled me in and I was whisked to that spot. Beautiful honey. I'm glad you liked it sweetheart. The words just started flowing this morning. |
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Beautiful poem wolfeyes. I have often thought my mom sends me butterflies, so you have touched my heart with that poem. Thank you You're quite welcome misty...butterflies are free spirited...and they are beautiful. |
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butterflies are gentle precious beautiful God's gifts...that was such a beautiful poem wolf eyes thank you for sharing You're quite welcome Tiff...glad you enjoyed it as well. |
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Your a lucky woman Songstress You know how to make someone feel like they are on top of the world sweetheart. I love you too. |
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that is so sweet, you both have been good to read my poetry as well...I thank you both, I will continue to look for such beautiful words it is a pleasure to read
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that is so sweet, you both have been good to read my poetry as well...I thank you both, I will continue to look for such beautiful words it is a pleasure to read |
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Yes Tiff, keep yours coming as well. Glad you enjoy reading mine and I enjoy yours as well.
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Robert, this is so beautiful. Thank you so much....
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Robert, this is so beautiful. Thank you so much.... Thank you JO....it took all this morning to write...I'm glad you liked it. |
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Nicely done
That's funny, I was sitiing on my porch in the fall and I put my head back and closed my eyes, I felt something on my face and when I opened my eyes a monarch had landed on my nose. I let it sit there for a while and it took off. I wish it would have spoken to me... |
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Nicely done That's funny, I was sitiing on my porch in the fall and I put my head back and closed my eyes, I felt something on my face and when I opened my eyes a monarch had landed on my nose. I let it sit there for a while and it took off. I wish it would have spoken to me... Who knows what would have happened knot...glad you liked it. |
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No such luck for me.
I'd be pleased if you would read mine. It just says poem in the topic column Take care |
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