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But he has no insight
to the howling that makes me shred this skin and see anew. If time and chance had its way, this skin would do as snakes and lizards do. Then I would tattoo every inch of me with his kisses and sighs between my thighs But he knows me not, yet The ink is waiting for the flow and design. |
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Nice poem .
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A lot of meaning, passion. Very creative
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Deep and meaningful without being offensive
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Thank you. He means a lot to me and inspires every inch of my mind, body, soul and spirit.
You know who you are my Sweet thang xxx |
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She found me dead , Laying on the way side, I was aside my self , Couldn't believe that I had died, I seen her spark , loves first sign As she approached me quickly With a fire in her eyes, I sat and watched , and wondered why, Confusion sat in and I began to lie, Apart from myself , I felt her love through a mysterious cry, The ones who killed me began to sue, She lifted me up as they walked on by , I felt her love and began to cry, As she put me together, and made since of these lines, Truly I love her forever , and together we will fly, Up west at the set up on the shine, I was broken in pieces by the wayside, She put me together and brought me back to life. But he has no insight to the howling that makes me shred this skin and see anew. If time and chance had its way, this skin would do as snakes and lizards do. Then I would tattoo every inch of me with his kisses and sighs between my thighs But he knows me not, yet The ink is waiting for the flow and design. |
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Nice poem too .
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Very nice very well written
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She found me dead , Laying on the way side, I was aside my self , Couldn't believe that I had died, I seen her spark , loves first sign As she approached me quickly With a fire in her eyes, I sat and watched , and wondered why, Confusion sat in and I began to lie, Apart from myself , I felt her love through a mysterious cry, The ones who killed me began to sue, She lifted me up as they walked on by , I felt her love and began to cry, As she put me together, and made since of these lines, Truly I love her forever , and together we will fly, Up west at the set up on the shine, I was broken in pieces by the wayside, She put me together and brought me back to life. But he has no insight to the howling that makes me shred this skin and see anew. If time and chance had its way, this skin would do as snakes and lizards do. Then I would tattoo every inch of me with his kisses and sighs between my thighs But he knows me not, yet The ink is waiting for the flow and design. Interesting... |
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I'm no one to judge this Poem bcoz I am not a Writer . There are so many great Poets here who can judge it well . But, though .. I do not want to go barehanded so i Give you 10/10 on scale for your Writing ! Welcome back after a Long Long Long Time ! We all Missed you ! |
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I'm no one to judge this Poem bcoz I am not a Writer . There are so many great Poets here who can judge it well . But, though .. I do not want to go barehanded so i Give you 10/10 on scale for your Writing ! Welcome back after a Long Long Long Time ! We all Missed you ! Xxx |
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