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I really would like some opinions. To much, too little, over-written,
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Put a Damn Shirt on. About all I will say. Or take those two SAME Photos down and Post New Ones with a Shirt On.
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Delete the bare chest photos. Very few women will like that, most will immediately move on and never come back.
Work on the text. One solid block of text doesn't invite to read. And get rid of the first part with all the negativity. That repels positive people, not the negative ones. |
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Edited by
Freebird Deluxe
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Wed 04/07/21 06:41 AM
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Delete the bare chest photos. Very few women will like that, most will immediately move on and never come back. Work on the text. One solid block of text doesn't invite to read. And get rid of the first part with all the negativity. That repels positive people, not the negative ones. He is gay ,so the shirtless pics are a bonus |
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A block of text IS a bit hard to take in
spacing out the text a bit, is easier to read. But I'm no expert. Good luck. 
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Hi Jonathan. may I suggest to delete the fluff sentences before " I am a gay man...."
Also change your title from "The world is a stage on which we all perform." - too fancy and not saying about who you are unless of course you are an actor Make it straight to the point "Gay man looking for same" Photos that may help you attract fellow gay men are ok including shirtless ones. It may repel women but do you really care? lol Welcome to Mingle2 and good luck in your search 
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