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Let's hear some good criticism
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At first glance it is ok but after reading it you really need more closeup photos of you. A better write up is needed about yourself and the person you are looking for. It's up to you but I never felt it is a good idea to include any kind of personal contact info in a profile like your WhatsApp number. Save that information for a personal message with someone.
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An advert for your WhatsApp, bad photos...
Rating is crap. |
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How about now?
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And now?
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It is better but better photos (closeups) is still needed.
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Pictures 2,3,6 and 9 ( I think it was ) are a bit pointless cus they either not clear or to far away .
In the about me section , you need to write about you , otherwise people will not have any idea the kind of person you are , or who you may be seeking . |
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As others have said, expand the about you section. Just saying that you are looking for someone to meet up with and have coffee with is so general. Talk about your interests and experiences, discuss the type of person you are hoping to find. Get rid of the car pictures, and a close up of you at the beach is better than one where your face is not showing up. Please get rid of the mirror selfie..... Half of your face is hidden by the phone your holding. Be clear on what you are looking for.
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I go by what everyone else said, not sure there are many early 20 somethings looking for activity partners which you stated you want.
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