I would be most grateful if you could find a few minutes to rate my profile. I seem to get a lot of 'Likes' from non UK members, who don't even take the time to read my profile, which is comprehensive and does state at the very beginning 'UK Only please'. My reason for this, is that I am not interested in long distant relationships and far too many of the 'Ladies' seem to be in need of financial support.

M<any thanks for you time

It's a lot better than most, but...

First you need to eliminate the opening sentence(s). The same people that are liking you are not actually reading your profile. You do not need to read the profile to "like" someone.

Second, add photos and include at least one full body shot.

Third, the essay is a bit wordy. It's good, but I'd edit it. Maybe it's just me, but all I want to read is a brief sketch of who you are and who you seek. The rest can be shared in messages in conversation.

What Geezer said.
I'd ever go further: Remove EVERYTHING before "I have a young outlook on life..."
That entire first section is totally off-putting and not necessary.

Like Geezer said, too wordy, you are way too elaborate with your medical dossier. It's one thing to mention health issues, it's another to dump all the ins and outs on someone before you've even talked.
You can discuss that when someone shows interest.

Good luck.

Many thanks for the feedback peeps

I agree! You described it perfectly!

Definitely shorten the biography, other than that best of luck to you

Looks like you have taken the suggestions given to you although your about me is a bit lengthy but you are good to go!