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Larsi, all the spelling errors, bad grammar, poor sentence structure and improper use of punctuation was just for you. I know how much you love correcting me. Lol see i was thinking of you before i even knew you! <3
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Aye, a wee bit rough around the edges and your toe nails need clipping, but you'll pull someone eventually I suppose?   Nah, I'm only joking, good, honest profile RCB and I'd use pic no. 4, but that's entirely your decision. 9/10  
Clip nails. Got it! |
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To be honest... the start is weird, redundant and the whole thing can be more compact and thus easier and nicer to read. Also, get rid of the red screaming "Will tell you later" under Interests. Don't write a tome in there, but say something at least. Now WILL TELL YOU LATER is the first thing someone sees and they're likely off. I am not a superhero or a saint. = subconsciously knocking yourself The whole "Who needs food ... people call me" is redundant. Goes for everyone. So first you lower yourself, continue to make a bland statement, then there's "I'm a mom and I love God". Not a great start. Then "Looking to see who's out there"... Makes me feel like DEEEUHHH!!! EVERYONE on a dating site is. Redundant and pointless. Why not write a better beginning, something positive about yourself and what kind of woman you are. And dare to be bold, don't put your foot into clichés! The rest is I love, I love, I love, I love, I love. Pfff.... I got tired after 3 of those. Condense it. You can say all these things in a much clearer and fun to read way. TELL it -more like a short story-, don't make an "I love" summary out of it. And leave some of them out as it's an overload of info. Hmmm welll lots to work on then. I am a mom. I do love God. Most important things in my life. So that's staying. :-) It's entirely up to you. But you asked, hihi. I don't do BS ratings. And a good profile does require some work and thought. I didn't mean removing the bit about being a mom and loving God because that's important to you. It's just that right now it's the first thing you say that's truly about you. And a man isn't looking for a mom, but a woman, a lover, a partner. And i sure dont want to be a grown mans mom lol. Kinda why the weird start i guess. My marriage i was held to this extremely high standard. Felt more like a mom to a grown man and felt neglected of just the basic everyday needs. I wasnt a partner or a lover. Oh forgot about the woman i am outside of being a wife and a mom. Those things are important roles but there's still Carrie. That likes going out. That loves fishing, festivals, art, travel......... It didnt matter what i needed or even loved. Lol All the more reason to show that, it has to shine through in your profile! And you don't need to state loads of things you like, it a bit like "show don't tell". So not summary style so much, although you can mention a few examples, but let who you are or like ooze out of what you say. Also see if you eventually can get a photo that is more full body, or at least top part. Slip on something that is flattering. I understand you're not comfortable about that, but if you are embarrassed about your body how can a man love you and your body? There's loads of men who love full women, so there's no reason to hide yourself. And like we women like to see what a guy looks like, men do too. So dress yourself up a bit, put on something nice and get a photo that shows a bit more than just your face. You gotta dare to be a bit bolder. It isn't really bold, but it will feel that way to you at first. Don't be ashamed of yourself or your body, RCB! What can help is to make photos for yourself first. Loads of them. After all you can simply delete :) Have fun with it. Difficult at first, but doing it makes it easier. Also helps to become more confident about your body. |
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I like your profile. Maybe a full body shot doing something interesting might dress up the photos somewhat, but otherwise yeah I like your profile.
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To be honest... the start is weird, redundant and the whole thing can be more compact and thus easier and nicer to read. Also, get rid of the red screaming "Will tell you later" under Interests. Don't write a tome in there, but say something at least. Now WILL TELL YOU LATER is the first thing someone sees and they're likely off. I am not a superhero or a saint. = subconsciously knocking yourself The whole "Who needs food ... people call me" is redundant. Goes for everyone. So first you lower yourself, continue to make a bland statement, then there's "I'm a mom and I love God". Not a great start. Then "Looking to see who's out there"... Makes me feel like DEEEUHHH!!! EVERYONE on a dating site is. Redundant and pointless. Why not write a better beginning, something positive about yourself and what kind of woman you are. And dare to be bold, don't put your foot into clichés! The rest is I love, I love, I love, I love, I love. Pfff.... I got tired after 3 of those. Condense it. You can say all these things in a much clearer and fun to read way. TELL it -more like a short story-, don't make an "I love" summary out of it. And leave some of them out as it's an overload of info. Hmmm welll lots to work on then. I am a mom. I do love God. Most important things in my life. So that's staying. :-) It's entirely up to you. But you asked, hihi. I don't do BS ratings. And a good profile does require some work and thought. I didn't mean removing the bit about being a mom and loving God because that's important to you. It's just that right now it's the first thing you say that's truly about you. And a man isn't looking for a mom, but a woman, a lover, a partner. And i sure dont want to be a grown mans mom lol. Kinda why the weird start i guess. My marriage i was held to this extremely high standard. Felt more like a mom to a grown man and felt neglected of just the basic everyday needs. I wasnt a partner or a lover. Oh forgot about the woman i am outside of being a wife and a mom. Those things are important roles but there's still Carrie. That likes going out. That loves fishing, festivals, art, travel......... It didnt matter what i needed or even loved. Lol All the more reason to show that, it has to shine through in your profile! And you don't need to state loads of things you like, it a bit like "show don't tell". So not summary style so much, although you can mention a few examples, but let who you are or like ooze out of what you say. Also see if you eventually can get a photo that is more full body, or at least top part. Slip on something that is flattering. I understand you're not comfortable about that, but if you are embarrassed about your body how can a man love you and your body? There's loads of men who love full women, so there's no reason to hide yourself. And like we women like to see what a guy looks like, men do too. So dress yourself up a bit, put on something nice and get a photo that shows a bit more than just your face. You gotta dare to be a bit bolder. It isn't really bold, but it will feel that way to you at first. Don't be ashamed of yourself or your body, RCB! What can help is to make photos for yourself first. Loads of them. After all you can simply delete :) Have fun with it. Difficult at first, but doing it makes it easier. Also helps to become more confident about your body. Noted. That's a work in progress i guess. |
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Larsi, all the spelling errors, bad grammar, poor sentence structure and improper use of punctuation was just for you. I know how much you love correcting me. Lol see i was thinking of you before i even knew you! <3 Duly noted. Thanks very much 
And no need to dress up for me. I prefer typos and funny stories 
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Thu 06/11/20 05:12 AM
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Larsi, all the spelling errors, bad grammar, poor sentence structure and improper use of punctuation was just for you. I know how much you love correcting me. Lol see i was thinking of you before i even knew you! <3 Duly noted. Thanks very much
And no need to dress up for me. I prefer typos and funny stories
Lol i do everything from my phone and in between work and kids and what ever crazy is going on. That's why I'm always asking can i call lol. It's just better for me. Im not sitting in a quiet corner of a cafe on my laptop lol. It's always in the middle of some lovely chaos or fighting sleep. |
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9/10 :)) So sweet. She came on just to rate me a 9 and then deactivate. Lol |
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Larsi, all the spelling errors, bad grammar, poor sentence structure and improper use of punctuation was just for you. I know how much you love correcting me. Lol see i was thinking of you before i even knew you! <3 Duly noted. Thanks very much
And no need to dress up for me. I prefer typos and funny stories
Lol i do everything from my phone and in between work and kids and what ever crazy is going on. That's why I'm always asking can i call lol. It's just better for me. Im not sitting in a quiet corner of a cafe on my laptop lol. It's always in the middle of some lovely chaos or fighting sleep. Aye. I know. But for calls I have to sit in front of my tablet. And sitting still is a wee difficult for me 
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Larsi, all the spelling errors, bad grammar, poor sentence structure and improper use of punctuation was just for you. I know how much you love correcting me. Lol see i was thinking of you before i even knew you! <3 Duly noted. Thanks very much
And no need to dress up for me. I prefer typos and funny stories
Lol i do everything from my phone and in between work and kids and what ever crazy is going on. That's why I'm always asking can i call lol. It's just better for me. Im not sitting in a quiet corner of a cafe on my laptop lol. It's always in the middle of some lovely chaos or fighting sleep. Aye. I know. But for calls I have to sit in front of my tablet. And sitting still is a wee difficult for me
Yet you always answer. :-) ty |
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Of course, I answer. I can be a nice fella
But always bear in mind the time difference and my stupid work hours 
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Of course, I answer. I can be a nice fella
But always bear in mind the time difference and my stupid work hours
Yes i always ask.. except when i don't
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You don't want to be an iceberg, rather show what you can offer... Some guys like feet and sucking toes... Lool i have a funny story about the whole feet thing... |
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10/10.
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I like your profile. Maybe a full body shot doing something interesting might dress up the photos somewhat, but otherwise yeah I like your profile. Ty. |
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Of course, I answer. I can be a nice fella
But always bear in mind the time difference and my stupid work hours
Yes i always ask.. except when i don't
Great, just scare the living daylight out of me 
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You don't want to be an iceberg, rather show what you can offer... Some guys like feet and sucking toes... Goodness I'm amazed you can fit thro a door with your ego. |
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You don't want to be an iceberg, rather show what you can offer... Some guys like feet and sucking toes... Goodness I'm amazed you can fit thro a door with your ego. 
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And it looks like another one bites the dust
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And it looks like another one bites the dust ️
Are you ready, hey, are you ready for this? Are you hanging on the edge of your seat? Out of the doorway the bullets rip To the sound of the beat Another one bites the dust Another one bites the dust And another one gone, and another one gone Another one bites the dust Hey, I'm gonna get you, too Another one bites the dust! Lol |
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