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The SnS,
Check it out, man or woman, and feel free to advise. Trying to be proactive while still being approachable. Trying to find the middle ground. |
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Edited by
Poetrywriter
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Sun 02/16/20 09:33 PM
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Looks good but I have a few suggestions. Firstly I would still add your interests instead of saying they are many and varied. The ladies would like to know if you have anything in common. Secondly, I would remove the negativity in the beginning of your write up about gift cards and scamming and just start it with If you are a woman...... You don't have to say REAL woman since they already know they are real. Other than that it is good to go.
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Looks good but I have a few suggestions. Firstly I would still add your interests instead of saying they are many and varied. The ladies would like to know if you have anything in common. Secondly, I would remove the negativity in the beginning of your write up about gift cards and scamming and just start it with If you are a woman...... You don't have to say REAL woman since they already know they are real. Other than that it is good to go. Thanks for the tips. I also made a post about using Google Images...it has help me weed through the maze out here. I will be taking your suggestions and editing because the negatives at the front isnt working anyway. Thank you again. |
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You are welcome.
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Indeed remove the negative start.
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Indeed remove the negative start. Okay, I thought I did. Is it not showing the last edit? Can you tell me what you see when you go there? |
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