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Topic: The Sleep (Suicide) - To each of my friends who were to week
neveragain's photo
Tue 12/18/07 11:31 AM
flowerforyou

goluckyornot's photo
Wed 12/19/07 04:52 AM

Has no substance noway


I agree with this guy.... not to good at all.

someguy1313's photo
Wed 12/19/07 05:26 AM
you are not going to make it to long on this site.

neveragain's photo
Mon 01/07/08 10:16 AM


Has no substance noway


I agree with this guy.... not to good at all.


noway

Dragoness's photo
Mon 01/07/08 10:22 AM
I enjoyed the read, especially the endingflowerforyou My heros in this world are those that come through the storm with more strength.

guyguy1225's photo
Mon 01/07/08 01:36 PM

I enjoyed the read, especially the endingflowerforyou My heros in this world are those that come through the storm with more strength.
I thought it was good I wrote something similar.......back in the days I was feeling hopeless about life , thanks to my kids and friends I came through the storm a better and stronger man

someguy1313's photo
Tue 01/08/08 04:17 AM
thanks for the kind words guysflowerforyou

oldsage's photo
Tue 01/08/08 04:44 AM
I think it is well written & expresses a message to me.

Others are intitled to their own thoughts.
I don't need to agree.

Acts like this are the last great cry for help.
I feel great pity that these people couldn't stop hurting in a different manner. We all need help to get thru life.

But that is just MY thoughts.

someguy1313's photo
Wed 01/09/08 09:01 AM


Acts like this are the last great cry for help.
I feel great pity that these people couldn't stop hurting in a different manner. We all need help to get thru life.



you got it

neveragain's photo
Thu 01/10/08 05:10 AM

I enjoyed the read, especially the endingflowerforyou My heros in this world are those that come through the storm with more strength.


what heros?.. just wondering

suffokatedarling's photo
Thu 01/10/08 10:33 AM

When the time came I started to cry,
As a word was whispered, 'suicide',
Not the answer... not the way out,
I could do nothing but scream and shout,
"Which way to turn,
To live or die,
Where can I hide,
I wish not to face another day"

So now I lay down and pray my first pray,
As I begin to shutter,
I utter, 'good bye',
Good-bye, mom
Good-bye dawn,
I just couldn't figure out the things in my head,

I will not miss the human race,
To the cops this will be, just another case,
And I will be a forgoten face,
So long world,
I am now free to be whatever I wish to be,

But now I see their crying faces,
I have made a grave mistake,
That has changed eveyones fate,
"Why did I do it?" I ask myself,
How can I cause them such great pain?

I am lucky as you see,
The sleep did not over power me!



Beautiful. Absolutley brilliant.

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