Topic: The Sleep (Suicide) - To each of my friends who were to week | |
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Has no substance I agree with this guy.... not to good at all. |
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you are not going to make it to long on this site.
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Has no substance I agree with this guy.... not to good at all. |
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I enjoyed the read, especially the ending My heros in this world are those that come through the storm with more strength.
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I enjoyed the read, especially the ending My heros in this world are those that come through the storm with more strength. |
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thanks for the kind words guys
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I think it is well written & expresses a message to me.
Others are intitled to their own thoughts. I don't need to agree. Acts like this are the last great cry for help. I feel great pity that these people couldn't stop hurting in a different manner. We all need help to get thru life. But that is just MY thoughts. |
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Acts like this are the last great cry for help. I feel great pity that these people couldn't stop hurting in a different manner. We all need help to get thru life. you got it |
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I enjoyed the read, especially the ending My heros in this world are those that come through the storm with more strength. what heros?.. just wondering |
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When the time came I started to cry, As a word was whispered, 'suicide', Not the answer... not the way out, I could do nothing but scream and shout, "Which way to turn, To live or die, Where can I hide, I wish not to face another day" So now I lay down and pray my first pray, As I begin to shutter, I utter, 'good bye', Good-bye, mom Good-bye dawn, I just couldn't figure out the things in my head, I will not miss the human race, To the cops this will be, just another case, And I will be a forgoten face, So long world, I am now free to be whatever I wish to be, But now I see their crying faces, I have made a grave mistake, That has changed eveyones fate, "Why did I do it?" I ask myself, How can I cause them such great pain? I am lucky as you see, The sleep did not over power me! Beautiful. Absolutley brilliant. |
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