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New here, looking for feedback and suggestions on making my profile better. All critiques welcome. Thanks.
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Good start, more pics will help, drinks not filled in ? Some people may see this as you having a problem ,also drink or smoke can be a yes or no for many, good luck
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Thanks for the feedback, would like to get more.
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Why start with drama about drama? Delete the drama, unless that's what you're about of course.
Apart from that you don't give much info. You want a relationship. And? What kind of woman, relationship? Say some more about yourself, but unless you are and want drama, keep it positive. |
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rate my profile..
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OP.... you should elaborate more about what kind of woman youβre looking to have a relationship with. Other than that I think itβs good! ![]() Good luck with finding what youβre looking for on here ![]() |
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Like Crystal said I would remove the first sentence about the drama. People who look at your profile do not want to read about negative things. Other than that your profile is ok.
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Ok, I made some adjustments, thanks to the feedback. If you could further rate the edited version, it would be much appreciated. I seriously have no clue what to write on these things or how it comes across.
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Better for sure and another picture too I think? Which is also good, nice smile!
If you want to further improve it Google it. Tons of info on how to write a good profile and it's really worth your time if you are looking for love. |
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