Topic: "My Friend" This one is short but one of my best. | |
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My friend, I hate to do it
But our friendship just can't last. The times we shared together have faded to the past. I told you it would happen. Our friendship was bound to end Although I know you care I don't consider you a friend. Please don't try to argue but try to understand That times change two people, as the tide changes the sand. Our friendship has to end, for I look at you in a different way. I've fallen, fallen in love with you "My Friend." |
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awwwwww
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Speachless
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Perfectly writen Who is the lucky girl?
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my husband had a friend, and now he's gone...
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Very good Humm have you told your friend/
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I did... I wrote this in 1999 and gave it to her. We are still talk today but it never went anywhere... She said I scared her, she never did explain what she meant by that.
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my husband had a friend, and now he's gone... What do you mean? |
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very nice. nice twist. :D
good write. keep it up. |
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thanks... dont see guys in here to offen
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thanks... dont see guys in here to offen Haha... All I have to say is Poetry is not for sissies. It takes a lot to take your emotions and put them down on a page. Nice work... just too bad it didn't quite work out for you. |
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thanks... dont see guys in here to offen Haha... All I have to say is Poetry is not for sissies. It takes a lot to take your emotions and put them down on a page. Nice work... just too bad it didn't quite work out for you. I agree |
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Great way to start off being friends... |
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Edited by
neveragain
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Mon 12/17/07 04:48 AM
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nevermind
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nevermind um... okay |
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just couldnt find the words... its wonderful
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