Topic: To Dream A Whisper...
someguy1313's photo
Wed 12/12/07 09:51 AM
As I lay my peaceful head, on satin lined with lace, My dreams of you come to me now, I soon shall see your face. Your eyes, they seem as if to say, "where have you been, my love?" I see them stare right into me but then you turn away. We fly by night together, through pleasure and through pain, But, still, I hear your silence in the pounding of the rain. I hold you tight within my arms and always in my heart. I do not want to wake just yet, for then we'll have to part. And suddenly I hear it now, faint but so sincere, You whisper to me softly saying, "I'll always be right here.." I wake with all the wonder, has it really been that long? Since I've heard you say a word of peace, and then there is the coming of the dawn.

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 12/12/07 09:55 AM
Awesome loved itbigsmile flowerforyou

just_mary's photo
Wed 12/12/07 10:17 AM
lovely

someguy1313's photo
Wed 12/12/07 10:26 AM
Thank you ladiesflowerforyou

trustingfate's photo
Wed 12/12/07 10:29 AM
beautiful....simply beautiful...you are wonderful honeyflowerforyou

neveragain's photo
Wed 12/12/07 11:43 AM
a nice ending poem at lastflowerforyou

Katertots37's photo
Wed 12/12/07 11:45 AM
very nice

someguy1313's photo
Wed 12/12/07 11:53 AM
thank you everyone

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 12/12/07 02:57 PM
Very nice... flowerforyou