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Witness
When I empty my eyes For you to draw, Through my pupils you See my mind raw-- As it sits in my head, Day after day, Rolling and twisting With its strange play. The scenes crawl in, The dreams spin out, And in between I With my curses and shouts. So what do you see there, Naked and pained, That makes you draw me So known, yet so strange? An eternal Sadness:::::: |
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Soooo sad...
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you finally posted one.... I thought you were to nervous?
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I am... just thought I would put one out there and see what people thought
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Edited by
neveragain
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Tue 11/27/07 07:18 AM
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Well I think its wonderful and you have much better ones. I know you will touch people keep it up.
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Sad and powerful. Great writing.
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((((((((Someguy1313))))))) hugs to you may the pain go away and you find those dreams to stay within.
Very good and welcome to the site hope to see more |
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thank you you will
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Sad and powerful. Great writing. yep |
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