What can I improve to get someone's attention?

Don't ask them, they'll mess you up so nobody else will want you. Then again don't ask us, fellas, we'll mess you up so you're no longer competition

don't listen to him ^^

I see 4 issues you may want to address.. but this is just MY opinion though..

firstly.. you're age puts you at 32.. and in your profile you say you were married 17 years.. that would mean you got married at 14/15 years old?? that's a lil unsettling.. maybe wanna skip that part and leave it for when someone gets to know you a bit better?? just a thought..

secondly... you work 6 days a week from 4am till whenever?? that doesn't sound like you'd have much time to invest in a budding (if not long-term) relationship.. you might just wanna say you have a demanding job and if you meet THE girl.. MAKE time..

thirdly.. you're comment about growing "old & moldy with" is a bit of a turn off.. I'd find something more romantic to replace THAT with..

and lastly... you're comment about "kiss on the forehead while she's sleeping" is a tad off-putting.. you may want to replace that, too, with something more romantic!

other than that.. you're pics are nice and the rest is good! best of luck in your search!