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Here is a tease of an excerpt of the story I finally have wanted to start...it will be my first suspense/thriller...sorry for the tease, but if you like like someone else did, (and they know who they are)...then you will have to wait for the book...hee hee..
Hands OFF by Robert Wolf Chapter I A soft breeze is blowing across the pom frons of the alligator pit, making small tangent ripples over the pond, when the terrifying voice of a man mutters, "No mister....please..." begging for his life. "This won't hurt too long, and only a little bit," sadistically the darkened figure assured him. "Please....don't do this....I haven't done anything...." begging and pleading for his life. Crawling on the ground on his elbows backwards, looking up at the tall figure above him, stalking slowly inch by inch. A light shines on him, revealing he is wearing a tight leather mask, the kind they use in sexual bondage. That will be last thing he will remember. The last thing he hears, is a door sliding up from behind him, hearing a gutteral hissing sound, then a snap like a steel bear trap coming down. There were no more begging pleas coming from him. All that was heard then, was the chomping of two powerful jaw. The masked man hears a splash near the waters edge, as he sees a lizard like tail disappear into the pond. "Well I guess I can get rid of this carcass. Poor man. Wish I knew who killed him." In a sadistic manner, knowing full well it was the gator. With a little help from him. He had his intentions and knowing his plan was about to take place. |
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creepy!!! But good
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very good
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Thank you rozey...it's gets better further along...
Thank you my princess...I'm sure you would enjoy it. |
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Biting her nails, anticipation growing stonger, and stronger, oh, my!!!!
I can't wait wolfeyes, this looks so good. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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You are going to bite them to the quick if you are not carefull...I know you will enjoy it Noden no doubt...keep your fingers crossed.
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awwwww very good wolfeyes will be waiting for the next part hehehehehe make it gory now I like scary gory stuff I know I'm a bit on the sick side but hey Stephen King and Kontz are my writers lol hehehehe
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Kristi then I know you will enjoy it...because it will be just like you want....but it will be introducing a new crime solver just like James Patterson has with Alex Cross. So be on the lookout.
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wolf
i do so enjoy your writing ![]() |
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Thanks kc...the way ya'll boost my ego I should already be on the bestsellers list...nahhhh....hopefully one day.
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you are always very kind to to me even if my thoughts only make sense to me and i appreciate that.
maybe the best sellers list is not that far off... ![]() ![]() |
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Well you have been kind likewise...It's in my nature to be kind to my friends and to keep them.
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i tipp my heineken to you
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Now just a minute....wait...oh ok you said heineken...whew....well since I don't drink, I tip my coffee to you.
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at least we tip together...
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(((( Wolf ))))))
Anticipation sets in,,,, waiting for the next installment,,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I so enjoy your work,,, ![]() |
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Intense.... a need to know more.... can't wait til the next tease.
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I think what I will do is just so that each of my friends see if for their own eyes only...I will send you each a chapter that you can save, then you will have the whole story before I have it all sent to press. Any takers?
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Sure have me guessing Wolf. That was very good. I wish you well on getting this published. I know a few authors myself. This is very intense. Look forward to seeing it come out someday. If they don't publish this, they will be missing a best seller. Thumbs up
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If I didn't have to work I would be sitting here typing it out as the juices flow until I get writers block. Because I just Chapter two last night fixing to start on chapter three. It's hard working and writing at the same time and tryin to get some rest too. I sure appreciate your comments fun.
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