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Topic: Just a little tease...just because...
Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 11/14/07 08:43 AM
Here is a tease of an excerpt of the story I finally have wanted to start...it will be my first suspense/thriller...sorry for the tease, but if you like like someone else did, (and they know who they are)...then you will have to wait for the book...hee hee..

Hands OFF
by
Robert Wolf



Chapter I

A soft breeze is blowing across the pom frons of the alligator pit, making small tangent ripples over the pond, when the terrifying voice of a man mutters, "No mister....please..." begging for his life.
"This won't hurt too long, and only a little bit," sadistically the darkened figure assured him.
"Please....don't do this....I haven't done anything...." begging and pleading for his life. Crawling on the ground on his elbows backwards, looking up at the tall figure above him, stalking slowly inch by inch. A light shines on him, revealing he is wearing a tight leather mask, the kind they use in sexual bondage. That will be last thing he will remember.
The last thing he hears, is a door sliding up from behind him, hearing a gutteral hissing sound, then a snap like a steel bear trap coming down. There were no more begging pleas coming from him. All that was heard then, was the chomping of two powerful jaw. The masked man hears a splash near the waters edge, as he sees a lizard like tail disappear into the pond.
"Well I guess I can get rid of this carcass. Poor man. Wish I knew who killed him." In a sadistic manner, knowing full well it was the gator. With a little help from him. He had his intentions and knowing his plan was about to take place.

rozey2680's photo
Wed 11/14/07 08:50 AM
creepy!!! But goodflowerforyou

shadow_princess's photo
Wed 11/14/07 08:50 AM
very good

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 11/14/07 08:54 AM
Thank you rozey...it's gets better further along...

Thank you my princess...I'm sure you would enjoy it.

Noden's photo
Wed 11/14/07 08:57 AM
Biting her nails, anticipation growing stonger, and stronger, oh, my!!!!


I can't wait wolfeyes, this looks so good.


drinker drinker drinker flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 11/14/07 09:02 AM
You are going to bite them to the quick if you are not carefull...I know you will enjoy it Noden no doubt...keep your fingers crossed.

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 11/14/07 03:14 PM
awwwww very good wolfeyes will be waiting for the next part hehehehehe make it gory now I like scary gory stuff I know I'm a bit on the sick side but hey Stephen King and Kontz are my writers lol hehehehelaugh laugh laugh laugh laugh bigsmile smokin

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 11/14/07 04:34 PM
Kristi then I know you will enjoy it...because it will be just like you want....but it will be introducing a new crime solver just like James Patterson has with Alex Cross. So be on the lookout.

kc0003's photo
Wed 11/14/07 05:52 PM
wolf

i do so enjoy your writing

drinker

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 11/14/07 06:00 PM
Thanks kc...the way ya'll boost my ego I should already be on the bestsellers list...nahhhh....hopefully one day.

kc0003's photo
Wed 11/14/07 06:14 PM
you are always very kind to to me even if my thoughts only make sense to me and i appreciate that.

maybe the best sellers list is not that far off...

drinker drinker

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 11/14/07 06:18 PM
Well you have been kind likewise...It's in my nature to be kind to my friends and to keep them.

kc0003's photo
Wed 11/14/07 06:36 PM
i tipp my heineken to you drinker

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 11/14/07 06:41 PM
Now just a minute....wait...oh ok you said heineken...whew....well since I don't drink, I tip my coffee to you.

kc0003's photo
Wed 11/14/07 08:06 PM
at least we tip together...drinker

LAMom's photo
Wed 11/14/07 08:31 PM
(((( Wolf ))))))


Anticipation sets in,,,, waiting for the next installment,,,

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I so enjoy your work,,, flowerforyou

lacileo1's photo
Wed 11/14/07 08:51 PM
Intense.... a need to know more.... can't wait til the next tease.

happy flowerforyou :wink:

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 11/15/07 06:06 AM
I think what I will do is just so that each of my friends see if for their own eyes only...I will send you each a chapter that you can save, then you will have the whole story before I have it all sent to press. Any takers?

no photo
Thu 11/15/07 06:27 AM
Sure have me guessing Wolf. That was very good. I wish you well on getting this published. I know a few authors myself. This is very intense. Look forward to seeing it come out someday. If they don't publish this, they will be missing a best seller. Thumbs up happy flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 11/15/07 06:31 AM
If I didn't have to work I would be sitting here typing it out as the juices flow until I get writers block. Because I just Chapter two last night fixing to start on chapter three. It's hard working and writing at the same time and tryin to get some rest too. I sure appreciate your comments fun.

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