Topic: enjoyin the veiw
lionsbrew's photo
Tue 11/07/06 06:51 PM
rain drops splash rooftops
i see the beat and my heart stops
just relaxin lookin out the window
watching rain fall i got nowere to go
i catch a glimpse from the corner of my eye
the greys and green lightning flashes in the sky
the rain keeps on coming down
i pick up my guitar and look around
how do i feel do i even care
just raw emotion from a blank stare
the sill is splashed the window wide open
the wind hits my face i sit here just hopen
i strum the strings the calms my soul
the music rushes deep from the sound hole
cascades of sound and color and smell
it blasts out this hearts deep well
enjoying the view through my window panes
the sweet smell that only comes about when it rains

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 11/07/06 06:58 PM
Nothing like playing to the rhythm of the rain.

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Tue 11/07/06 07:01 PM
I could feel the wind and rain and hea in the background if natues song
the gentle strumming of a guia...most beautiful Lion

greeneyedlady42's photo
Tue 11/07/06 07:06 PM
Nothing greater than seeing what comes out when a writer reaches deep
into their soul.
Really awesome !!

lionsbrew's photo
Tue 11/07/06 07:07 PM
thanx it means alot comin from you. i just kinda had it swimmin in my
head ya know

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Tue 11/07/06 08:36 PM
Lionsbrew, I can relate to the depth of your soul, absolutely real and
you have touched many spots in my being. Thank you, Green eyes

ellgee1976's photo
Mon 11/27/06 03:30 PM
wow lion, i read that and was right there, feelin it

awesome :D

LG

herewego's photo
Thu 02/08/07 02:47 PM
love it lion..

rain makes me so happy

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Thu 02/08/07 02:54 PM
beaUTIFUl lion.. and the accompanying music is wonderful as well :smile:

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Thu 02/08/07 02:56 PM
Still my absolute favorite!! Much love to ya bro!!

lionsbrew's photo
Thu 02/08/07 02:56 PM
thanx i havent read this one in so long i forgot what it said lol.

aleacim831's photo
Thu 02/08/07 03:05 PM
Love that poem babe love

michael1313's photo
Thu 02/08/07 03:06 PM
Good work Lion!smokin

LAMom's photo
Thu 02/08/07 03:09 PM
Really Nice Lion

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:39 PM
Very nice! Love the rain!:tongue:

karmafury's photo
Thu 02/08/07 07:14 PM
Can't believe I missed this one. Very, very good Lion. Really enjoyed
it.

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Thu 02/08/07 07:17 PM
MR LION you need to put some music to this one!!! Great job.
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