Topic: How can I improve my profile? | |
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Hi,
Feedback can be scary, but.. I want, no need to see myself as others see me. I've dated, but WE have not met yet! So please be honest, but kind. |
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Not bad. I'd add a little bit about what you're looking for.
The second photo is a bit odd? Like two photos merged together? |
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The tenor of this profile is nice. Think it will be a lucky guy who picks you.
Your interest paragraph was a little run on and could be restructured a little and be more effective. I would add more pictures and photo shop the barred backdrop out of the lead shot. It suggests a bed or a rocking chair; probably neither your most flattering. I think your motorcycle pick is ok but again not the most flattering and the guys in the background may not help your dating effort. You need a nice full length photo so you get that out of the way. And since often the question is how many people live with you; you probably want to address the ages/number of dependents. Since the response is often hostile to pictures of children I would keep it vague; example "one teen son;two twenty something daughters in college. I wish you well and glad to see you join our community. |
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come on guys give the lady some answers!!!!....i gave her mine...
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THANK YOU, your constructive review is greatly appreciated. I will consider each one carefully.
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I like your profile I do agree that you need more pictures.
I do get a sense of who you are. I also think you are looking for like minded. And yet maybe list some things you are really looking for in a man. Also with your interests listed already with camping and yard work, gardening I am not so sure if you want it in the main body of the profile also. Best wishes in your search Welcome |
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Hi VaLizzy, welcome to Mingle2
I think your profile is very good. No complaints here. Join us here in the forums and have fun making friends while you're looking. Good luck in your search |
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THIS PROFILE IS AWESOME SISTER KEEP IT UP!
I mean you have a lot of interest that would catch any mans. |
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