Topic: The Way I'am
darkangelchidl_69's photo
Wed 10/24/07 03:13 PM
It's hard being alone
Everyday I try and I try
But all my feelings have shown
Thats why at night I cry.

I may try to hide in the shadow
But someone always finds me
I just want to stay in the shadow
I don't know why they just won't let me be.

It confuses me why everyone
wants me to come out
into the world, thats been done
I just want to find a place and shout.

For me being alone is good
when I'm alone I find peace and joy
My life is like it should
Many say that being alone can't bring joy.

Constantly I try to interact
But I'm slowly pulled away
Back into the shadows
Where i belong hidden away from the world.

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 10/24/07 03:38 PM
Perfect timing.............

blonderockermom's photo
Wed 10/24/07 03:40 PM
:smile: flowerforyou

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Thu 10/25/07 06:09 AM
4 people have voted to delete this as "pity-seeking". I don't know the 'right' answer, but I just voted to keep it because this is the poetry section - by its nature a forum for emotional self-expression.

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Thu 10/25/07 06:15 AM
damn deleter's....I voted against deletion as well NO POETRY SHOULD BE DELETED!!


Excellent piece Darkflowerforyou


shadow_princess's photo
Thu 10/25/07 06:17 AM
awwww derick that was beautiful...i struggle w those feelings too

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Thu 10/25/07 06:27 AM
It is no longer on the delete list...

You are a great poet.

You did have a darker poem that might promote the unsavoury of attempted suicide. But, writing of such for the purpose of the art and healing, I support. If you touch the reader by your work despite the contents, you reached the purpose of your art.

Perhaps, google for a poetry site where you get more feedback? I know one easy site...am not active much there but still a member, e-mail me if you are interested. There's heap of poetry sites about just google it.

Cherub is right poetry should not be deleted


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Thu 10/25/07 02:17 PM
allpoetry.....google it flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 10/25/07 03:08 PM
good write bigsmile flowerforyou