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It's hard being alone
Everyday I try and I try But all my feelings have shown Thats why at night I cry. I may try to hide in the shadow But someone always finds me I just want to stay in the shadow I don't know why they just won't let me be. It confuses me why everyone wants me to come out into the world, thats been done I just want to find a place and shout. For me being alone is good when I'm alone I find peace and joy My life is like it should Many say that being alone can't bring joy. Constantly I try to interact But I'm slowly pulled away Back into the shadows Where i belong hidden away from the world. |
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Perfect timing.............
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4 people have voted to delete this as "pity-seeking". I don't know the 'right' answer, but I just voted to keep it because this is the poetry section - by its nature a forum for emotional self-expression.
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damn deleter's....I voted against deletion as well NO POETRY SHOULD BE DELETED!!
Excellent piece Dark |
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awwww derick that was beautiful...i struggle w those feelings too
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It is no longer on the delete list...
You are a great poet. You did have a darker poem that might promote the unsavoury of attempted suicide. But, writing of such for the purpose of the art and healing, I support. If you touch the reader by your work despite the contents, you reached the purpose of your art. Perhaps, google for a poetry site where you get more feedback? I know one easy site...am not active much there but still a member, e-mail me if you are interested. There's heap of poetry sites about just google it. Cherub is right poetry should not be deleted |
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allpoetry.....google it
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good write
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