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Topic: And Then You Get Burned
whispertoascream Joined Fri 11/17/06 Posts: 22844	Sun 10/21/07 05:56 AM
So many nights we have sat up and talked And then you get burned So many times we have held hands and walked And then you get burned So many hours I have spent to try to help you And then you get burned So many times I have thought you were true And then you get burned. So many days I have longed to be by your side And then you get burned So many times with you I wanted to hide And then you get burned I was blind and stupid and could not see All this pain and hurt you have cause inside of me Loving you is all I ever wanted But now it feels like I have been nothing but taunted There was a board made “Do All Men Play Games?” My answer to that is, “They Are All The Same” I have not met one who has proved me wrong You get tired of listening to the same old song Jumping to conclusions is all that you have done Kind of makes life not really all that fun I want to be happy when is it my turn? I do not know, cause in the end you always get burned Melissa Sunday October 21st. 2007

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sun 10/21/07 06:01 AM
Aww Melissa, I am sorry for whoever done that to you. One bad guy makes the rest of us who do not do the things like he did, look bad. One day your prints will come...I'm sorry that's for Photomat...your prince will come sweetie. You will see. Robert

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whispertoascream Joined Fri 11/17/06 Posts: 22844	Sun 10/21/07 06:14 AM
((((((((Wolf)))))))))) Thank you my friends. I am giving up the search though. Thank you for reading guys.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sun 10/21/07 06:18 AM
Never give up sweetie, because you never know who might be out there. I've tried all the sites and was veered to this one for a reason and I think I found that reason. Only time will tell. Keep in there and you will see what I am talking about. My prayers are with you. Don't leave this site. Your poetry says a lot about you too.

Zero_Effected Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 18395	Sun 10/21/07 06:23 AM
((((((((whisper))))))))) I feel your pain sis!

geo54 Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 2230	Sun 10/21/07 06:37 AM
sometimes when we give up the search we are the ones that get found

whispertoascream Joined Fri 11/17/06 Posts: 22844	Sun 10/21/07 06:40 AM
Thank you everbody for reading. I wish you guys all the best in your search, but for me I am out of here. Take care all. (((((((((Z)))))))) Love you sis.

Zero_Effected Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 18395	Sun 10/21/07 06:45 AM
Love you too sis!! sometimes.. all we really NEED is family and friends whisper.. and we're here for you.. whenever!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sun 10/21/07 06:49 AM
She's gone...she's really gone. She is deactivated. Her poetry was good too.

Zero_Effected Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 18395	Sun 10/21/07 06:58 AM
sometimes wolf.. we just have to take a lil time to ourselves to heal!

Nascarfan119 Joined Sat 10/20/07 Posts: 100	Sun 10/21/07 07:02 AM
sorry, but u cannot say that all men are the same if u havent met them all!

whispertoascream Joined Fri 11/17/06 Posts: 22844	Mon 10/22/07 04:25 AM
Nascar I can say that all the men I have ever met have been the same. So I still stick by that line. Thank you for reading all.

Zero_Effected Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 18395	Mon 10/22/07 04:55 AM
((((((whisper))))))))) welcome back lil sis..

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no_psychos_please Joined Sat 07/21/07 Posts: 1131	Mon 10/22/07 06:15 AM
Hmmmmmm I am hurt that you have been hurt I can't apologize for or change the actions of other men you may have met, but I can feel sad to be added among them in your thoughts ..... Sad indeed.... I still wish you a wonderful day

blonderockermom Joined Wed 08/08/07 Posts: 6886	Mon 10/22/07 06:25 AM
Sorry whisper, I can feel your pain, and have felt the same as you before, but don't give up hope. There really are some great guys out there...you're day will come..

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 10/22/07 06:55 AM
Welcome back sweet lady....I too am hurt like NPP...it puts a bad rep on us guys that aren't like that. Glad to see you back. Keep posting those poems whisper.

whispertoascream Joined Fri 11/17/06 Posts: 22844	Mon 10/22/07 01:02 PM
You know sometimes it is good to just get things out. Makes you feel better afterwards. I only ever write a poem when I am in a certain mood. So again thank you all for your love and support.