Topic: Sunrise
poeticflight's photo
Thu 10/18/07 04:05 PM
Your nights are cold and lonely.
The shadows hide your lust.
Thoughts of me, your rising sun,
begin to build your trust.

As time draws nigh for the dawn
you're moist with mornings dew.
Knowing, as the seconds fade,
i'm closer yet to you.

I slowly rise and cast my rays,
upon your glistening skin.
My warm and golden beams of light
are felt from deep within.

I fight my way through your night,
and darkness I have slain.
With the dawn, all shadows gone
as are your fears and pain.

Your lust becomes a raging fire,
it burns out of control.
I am the flames that fuel desire,
and consume you, heart and soul.

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Thu 10/18/07 04:07 PM
this is good stuff...you keep a nice rhythm...flowerforyou

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Thu 10/18/07 04:08 PM
Ohh totally intense..exquisite piece!!

blonderockermom's photo
Thu 10/18/07 04:09 PM
wow, that was great...very sensual too:smile: flowerforyou

poeticflight's photo
Thu 10/18/07 04:09 PM
well thank you... maybe some dark poetry?

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Thu 10/18/07 04:12 PM
Can't wait to see it...love the dark side...for some interesting reading with a dark twist, check out the Gallows.flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 10/18/07 06:43 PM
flowerforyou Very good