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Pieces of my broken dreams tumble to the beaten path
quietly,hauntingly,hopelessly love slips through an open door, as if un- touched by the very lives it once held together. Darkness fills my once bright eyes. Now, destiny crams herself down my throat. Only the bitter taste of sorrow survives where there is no light. Something inside me cries, what's left of me slowly dies. Shattered lives fall softly back to their wombs, and death comes swiftly to those who can not fight. Great walls construct themselves around a now occupied one person shell, where I awake, alone. At night, the voices and laughter of my fate keep me awake. I wonder, as I grow weary, how can a heart in pieces, still beat. Loneliness eats my will, misery accompanies me in your stead. Still I wonder, In a world full of people, does anyone else know, we are all just one mistake, one break-up, one death away, from, madness |
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Very nice! Glad to see you posting here!
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t/y
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Welcome to JSH! Good job! Hope to see more of your work!
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very nice kc & welcome to JSH
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Hiya M, Just venturing out now??
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actually this the first time anyone has seen my stuff. thank you for your kindness
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very nice
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waiting for the poem of your heart filled with joy and glee...Should prove equally brilliant!!
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not sure i would have used the word brilliant but, i do appreciate it.
i will try but, sad comes much easier and way more frequent |
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Very Nice
Welcome to the site |
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Very nice poem...
Welcome to the poem section! |
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We do madness here, loneliness, friendship, heartache, failire, support... A typical mishmash of dysfunctional friends..... a family.
Welcome! |
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very good poem, good length. welcome, to the family of music makers and dreamers of dreams. welcome to jsh. keep up the good work!
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tx,bear,no_, crimsom i thank you all. i am humbled by the response. i wish i had found this place long ago.
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excellent ty for sharing
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ty
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yes very nice indeed
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welcome love the poem great job
post more |
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thanx again mom
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