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Great walls construct themselves around a now occupied one person shell,
where I awake, alone. great line!!! |
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Welcome Writing, a welcome release for frustrations. Your writing conjured up very vivid images of a person whose soul has been torn apart.I suspect there is also hope ? Very nice work.More !
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I believe we live for two things, love and hope.
They each have their own place and without them we would be lost. thank you...and yes i will post more.I love this place!!! |
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hello
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kc I liked this even more the 2nd time I read it.
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we would be lost kc...so right
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Very nice Kc...like others I hope to see something of cheer and hope. Sadness does befall us all, but once we start writing, we tend to see hope and start writing with happiness. Hope to see more and welcome.
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wolf...thank you... like i like your work and appriciate you stopping to post
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