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DARKNESS __________________ When your blood first pearled From that invisible wound Your very first admission Did not come too soon Did not save the day Or reverse the past But did set you on A different path Did give you hope Beyond what you knew The darkness of millions Became the light for the few. Vitsec |
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have read it three or four times - I like when I have to do that - it is a good piece. 'The darkness of millions Became the light for the few.' That can be interpreted so many ways. I like the sound of it. |
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Bravo
Dokładny... |
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Thanks Dear. I think all poetry has many different meanings that are as different as the perceptions of whoever reads another's written thoughts.
V. |
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Thanks Pansy Tilly .. but please tell me what the D word means ?
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Edited by
Pansytilly
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Sun 02/22/15 10:51 PM
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Oops... Auto correct
Should've been dokladny with a scribble in the letter "l" Means precise, accurate or exact |
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I like the way your head puts words together.Definitely unique with a style that is your own.Dark,real and a slap in the face.Nice.
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I like the way your head puts words together.Definitely unique with a style that is your own.Dark,real and a slap in the face.Nice. long time no see |
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Hi PT. I am a sucker for a nice neck. If that is your neck,it is a very nice one. Hello again ;)
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Edited by
Pansytilly
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Mon 02/23/15 06:46 AM
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Hi PT. I am a sucker for a nice neck. If that is your neck,it is a very nice one. Hello again ;) |
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a very nice write op ...
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