Topic: DARKNESS
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Sun 02/22/15 08:47 PM


DARKNESS

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When your blood first pearled

From that invisible wound

Your very first admission

Did not come too soon


Did not save the day

Or reverse the past

But did set you on

A different path


Did give you hope

Beyond what you knew

The darkness of millions

Became the light for the few.



Vitsec






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Sun 02/22/15 10:24 PM


have read it three or four times - I like when I have to do that - it is a good piece.


'The darkness of millions

Became the light for the few.'


That can be interpreted so many ways.

I like the sound of it.

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Sun 02/22/15 10:38 PM
Bravo flowerforyou

Dokładny...

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Sun 02/22/15 10:43 PM
Thanks Dear. I think all poetry has many different meanings that are as different as the perceptions of whoever reads another's written thoughts.

V.

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Sun 02/22/15 10:46 PM
Thanks Pansy Tilly .. but please tell me what the D word means ?

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Sun 02/22/15 10:48 PM
Edited by Pansytilly on Sun 02/22/15 10:51 PM
Oops... Auto correct

Should've been dokladny with a scribble in the letter "l"

Means precise, accurate or exact

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Mon 02/23/15 05:33 AM
I like the way your head puts words together.Definitely unique with a style that is your own.Dark,real and a slap in the face.Nice.

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Mon 02/23/15 05:49 AM

I like the way your head puts words together.Definitely unique with a style that is your own.Dark,real and a slap in the face.Nice.


waving long time no see

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Mon 02/23/15 06:34 AM
Hi PT. I am a sucker for a nice neck. If that is your neck,it is a very nice one. Hello again ;)

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Mon 02/23/15 06:41 AM
Edited by Pansytilly on Mon 02/23/15 06:46 AM

Hi PT. I am a sucker for a nice neck. If that is your neck,it is a very nice one. Hello again ;)


embarassed :laughing: flowerforyou

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Mon 02/23/15 10:23 AM
a very nice write op ... :smile: