Topic: A Poem
Dcritelli85's photo
Mon 02/16/15 02:46 PM
Treasure chests, stars and the bright full-moon...
Seeking a fantasy that can heal and soothe...
Many a dreamer lay awake in their beds...
Remembering only then, the things that were said...

Questioning loyalty, and if friendship is true...
Everyone has a place in this world, what about you?...
Testing again, life seems to repeat itself...
Only this time, I can make it with no help...

Are we so different, can we be measured by creed?...
Oceans and spirits seem connected, they even run deep...
Love not only what is pleasing, or you may not see...
The truth underneath the exterior, the kindness in me...

Peace be to you sisters and brothers...
May you find the love and embrace of one another...

-Daniel Critelli

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Mon 02/16/15 10:16 PM


Love not only what is pleasing, or you may not see...

The truth underneath the exterior, the kindness in me...



Very nice Dc

this time you can make it without help...

:smile: hope so

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Tue 02/17/15 12:24 AM
nice... smile2

mowildflower's photo
Tue 02/17/15 01:44 AM
...fantasy will never heal, it is only a dream, find the real deal.