This is the first time and probably last time I will ever write something like this, I'm just not very creative or thought provoking like others here. This is how I feel and how things go when trying to approach someone I don't know. I'm sure some people can relate.



I want to say hi to you
I have so many things
I would like to say
I try to speak to you
Silence fills the air
My heart starts to race
Dread starts to fill the air
A quick smile and a stare
Hope soon fades fast
As I know this is going know where
I begin to cry on the inside
I don't know what to do
Emptiness once again fills me
An empty shell I start from the beginning
There's no point to even try
It all ends the same in this losing game
A million thoughts come to my mind
You'll never know me and I'll never win.

Hey, this is a very sweet post! Don't apologize for your poem. I'm glad you shared it with us!

I know this one all to well
Seemed pretty creative to me though

It's great...very sad though...don't ever give up!

love it....

nice

Ohhhhhhhh very nice,, once must never give up.... Life is truely incredible...

A few weeks ago I got to know a little of you and I think your a great guy,just a little shy,open your heart and say the words you need to.And this was really nice I hope we see more.

I don't think I'll be writing anything else and for those who told me not to give up part of me gave up long ago and the other part is just hanging in there.

Yes..I'm sure MOST of us can relate...I know I CAN!! Very well said...and I think you sell yourself way too short...this was very heartfelt, and creative!! Sometimes expressing your thoughts and feelings...through writing...can be a very positive thing...especially if you're a bit on the shy side...and/or going through tough times! Life's full of disappointments...we learn to deal with them...and move on! Live, Love, and Laugh...and NEVER GIVE UP!!