Topic: Autumn Feel
SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Mon 11/17/14 05:15 AM
Outdoors, warm coat
Thinking my thoughts
Not seeing what's around me
Not really
Until I let go
of my thoughts
open my heart
land deeper in my body
suddenly I see
I feel
The wind touching my face
caressing my cheeks
with its cold fingers
I turn my hands
palms out to feel
the wind, the energy
the autumn in the air
I slow my pace
and look around
the beautiful colours
what a gorgeous palet
of autumn colours!
The painter in me
is deeply touched
by the leaves
in burnt umber with
a hint of cad yellow
there's reds and browns
greens and ochre
warm orange
I breathe in the colours
see as if I see this world
for the very first time
I feel the wonder in me
perceiving, feeling this beauty!
Two pigeons flying away
I look up at them
and smile
My hands tingle
in spite of the cold wind
they feel warm
as if the cold wind's energy
warms my hands
What a wonderful feeling!
If only you open
your heart and your eyes
What a wonderful world!

mowildflower's photo
Mon 11/17/14 06:01 AM

Outdoors, warm coat
Thinking my thoughts
Not seeing what's around me
Not really
Until I let go
of my thoughts
open my heart
land deeper in my body
suddenly I see
I feel
The wind touching my face
caressing my cheeks
with its cold fingers
I turn my hands
palms out to feel
the wind, the energy
the autumn in the air
I slow my pace
and look around
the beautiful colours
what a gorgeous palet
of autumn colours!
The painter in me
is deeply touched
by the leaves
in burnt umber with
a hint of cad yellow
there's reds and browns
greens and ochre
warm orange
I breathe in the colours
see as if I see this world
for the very first time
I feel the wonder in me
perceiving, feeling this beauty!
Two pigeons flying away
I look up at them
and smile
My hands tingle
in spite of the cold wind
they feel warm
as if the cold wind's energy
warms my hands
What a wonderful feeling!
If only you open
your heart and your eyes
What a wonderful world!


Wow, that is awesome. :heart:

no photo
Mon 11/17/14 06:25 AM
For someone who claims they are not into reading poetry, you do a damn fine job when it comes to writing it...I love this Crystal flowerforyou

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Mon 11/17/14 07:49 AM
Thank you both :heart: flowerforyou

Leigh, I'm generally not into poetry, but I do write ...
And yes, it was a pretty awesome experience! I'm learning to feel more and more again .. and I'm loving it! Finally getting my energetic mojo back
flowerforyou

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Mon 11/17/14 08:01 AM

Thank you both :heart: flowerforyou

Leigh, I'm generally not into poetry, but I do write ...
And yes, it was a pretty awesome experience! I'm learning to feel more and more again .. and I'm loving it! Finally getting my energetic mojo back
flowerforyou


You know what, that is EXACTLY what I thought as I was reading your poem..."She's getting back to her true self."...Good for you!!flowerforyou ...

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Mon 11/17/14 09:05 AM


Thank you both :heart: flowerforyou

Leigh, I'm generally not into poetry, but I do write ...
And yes, it was a pretty awesome experience! I'm learning to feel more and more again .. and I'm loving it! Finally getting my energetic mojo back
flowerforyou


You know what, that is EXACTLY what I thought as I was reading your poem..."She's getting back to her true self."...Good for you!!flowerforyou ...

Thank you Leigh
I've said it before, you're a very perceptive woman!~
flowers

no photo
Mon 11/17/14 03:45 PM
Nice write..When you get your mojo back, words flow beautifully..

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Mon 11/17/14 04:19 PM
Thank you so much!
flowerforyou