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Outdoors, warm coat
Thinking my thoughts Not seeing what's around me Not really Until I let go of my thoughts open my heart land deeper in my body suddenly I see I feel The wind touching my face caressing my cheeks with its cold fingers I turn my hands palms out to feel the wind, the energy the autumn in the air I slow my pace and look around the beautiful colours what a gorgeous palet of autumn colours! The painter in me is deeply touched by the leaves in burnt umber with a hint of cad yellow there's reds and browns greens and ochre warm orange I breathe in the colours see as if I see this world for the very first time I feel the wonder in me perceiving, feeling this beauty! Two pigeons flying away I look up at them and smile My hands tingle in spite of the cold wind they feel warm as if the cold wind's energy warms my hands What a wonderful feeling! If only you open your heart and your eyes What a wonderful world! |
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Outdoors, warm coat Thinking my thoughts Not seeing what's around me Not really Until I let go of my thoughts open my heart land deeper in my body suddenly I see I feel The wind touching my face caressing my cheeks with its cold fingers I turn my hands palms out to feel the wind, the energy the autumn in the air I slow my pace and look around the beautiful colours what a gorgeous palet of autumn colours! The painter in me is deeply touched by the leaves in burnt umber with a hint of cad yellow there's reds and browns greens and ochre warm orange I breathe in the colours see as if I see this world for the very first time I feel the wonder in me perceiving, feeling this beauty! Two pigeons flying away I look up at them and smile My hands tingle in spite of the cold wind they feel warm as if the cold wind's energy warms my hands What a wonderful feeling! If only you open your heart and your eyes What a wonderful world! Wow, that is awesome. |
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For someone who claims they are not into reading poetry, you do a damn fine job when it comes to writing it...I love this Crystal
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Thank you both
Leigh, I'm generally not into poetry, but I do write ... And yes, it was a pretty awesome experience! I'm learning to feel more and more again .. and I'm loving it! Finally getting my energetic mojo back |
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Thank you both Leigh, I'm generally not into poetry, but I do write ... And yes, it was a pretty awesome experience! I'm learning to feel more and more again .. and I'm loving it! Finally getting my energetic mojo back You know what, that is EXACTLY what I thought as I was reading your poem..."She's getting back to her true self."...Good for you!! ... |
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Thank you both Leigh, I'm generally not into poetry, but I do write ... And yes, it was a pretty awesome experience! I'm learning to feel more and more again .. and I'm loving it! Finally getting my energetic mojo back You know what, that is EXACTLY what I thought as I was reading your poem..."She's getting back to her true self."...Good for you!! ... Thank you Leigh I've said it before, you're a very perceptive woman!~ |
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Nice write..When you get your mojo back, words flow beautifully..
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Thank you so much!
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