Topic: Noticing Folks
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Tue 05/27/14 07:15 AM
Watching, watching and listening
listening as folks mingle.
Noticing their presentation
noting their reply and reactions.

Taking notice, noting folks,
noting their presentation
and reactions leaves one with
little doubt that folks come in
many flavors, colors and sizes.

Some are jovial, happy and playful
Others are sad, hurting and resentful
Then there are those who are spiteful,
they are vindictive and trouble makers.

As for me, I feel at peace with being,
I feel at peace with my life.

Give me freedom,
freedom to be my very best,
freedom to be whomever I choose.
Freedom to wander the world over.

Only to realize, there is no place
No place like home,
where the heart resides.



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Tue 05/27/14 12:33 PM
Wow! That's mighty powerful stuff, Akita. I read and felt every moment you endevoured to share in this. I could feel it.

Now, as I see it, your overall writing style is based of reality. And 'reality' reigns herein.

I like this piece, Akita. You give of a more personal side of you. Ans let's all note that - that is always to be deeply respected. Well done, my warm friend. If ye really sought to touch others inner-emotionally, you've touched me.

Great work, Akita. Great piece!

tommy boy moran / " The Island "

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Wed 05/28/14 06:07 AM
smooched Tom, Thank You! I enjoy reading your post, you have a style that I can relate with.