Topic: this is not fair
Vegasrose702's photo
Mon 05/19/14 05:11 AM
It all happened so fast...
You saved me from my Past...
You swept me off my feet..
and you were so very sweet...


I Ached for more..
my body tingled
and my heart raced..
'my eyes dilated
I ached for more...'


My friend, lover,
please do not leave
I will do anything...
your smell is still in the pillow...
I will do anything...

this is not fair...
I was walking on air...
you had me believing
you had me convinced
this is not fair...

ImperfectPoet's photo
Mon 05/19/14 08:03 AM
Bittersweet. An excellent write steeped in the tragedy of the sorrow of the loss of what seemed to be so real. I can relate. I can't tell you how long it took me to wash the case and get a new pillow when it happened to me. But, as sad as it is to lose what one thinks is real because it feels so, it but shows how beautiful the feeling will be when the one who will not leave will be more than the memory a scent in a pillow can bring, and in more joyous ways =^) Thank you for sharing.

no photo
Mon 05/19/14 09:01 AM
flowers

Vegasrose702's photo
Mon 05/19/14 11:01 AM
thankyou

pkh's photo
Mon 05/19/14 11:02 PM
Nice write

kc0003's photo
Tue 05/20/14 05:43 PM
flowerforyou