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Topic: I WANT IT...
Vegasrose702 Joined Mon 01/20/14 Posts: 21	Wed 05/14/14 12:27 AM
silence.... peace.. We want it... the screaming... the rages... my heart was pounding. my hands were trembling.... I watched and listened... afraid of making a mistake afraid of your ridicule You taught me so much... I watched and listened... afraid of making a mistake.. afraid of ridicule the screaming .. the rages... silence peace I want it.....

billh Joined Mon 12/10/07 Posts: 81	Wed 05/14/14 12:36 AM
Lovely verse.

Vegasrose702 Joined Mon 01/20/14 Posts: 21	Wed 05/14/14 12:40 AM
thankyou

billh Joined Mon 12/10/07 Posts: 81	Wed 05/14/14 12:46 AM
Your Welcome,Have a nice Day.

BrandNewJourney Joined Tue 02/25/14 Posts: 6055	Wed 05/14/14 08:00 AM
Nicely done

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 05/14/14 10:01 AM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Wed 05/14/14 11:03 AM
silence.... peace.. We want it... the screaming... the rages... my heart was pounding. my hands were trembling.... I watched and listened... afraid of making a mistake afraid of your ridicule You taught me so much... I watched and listened... afraid of making a mistake.. afraid of ridicule the screaming .. the rages... silence peace I want it..... This is good....!!...Thanks for the share Rose!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 05/14/14 03:39 PM
Very nice

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 05/14/14 04:24 PM


ImperfectPoet Joined Sun 05/18/14 Posts: 39	Wed 05/21/14 02:03 PM
Excellent write. Beauty from what seems tragedy. I hope there is silence and peace. Thank you for sharing =^)

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