Topic: Drowning
32shadesofcray's photo
Sun 03/16/14 04:53 PM
Edited by 32shadesofcray on Sun 03/16/14 04:53 PM
In the middle of the ocean
Slowly I'm drowning,
There's no one to hear my screams!
I'm suffocating,
But the harder I struggle,
The further down I sink.
The rain batters my face,
And the current pulls me under.
I can no longer put up a fight.
I give up the battle,
There'��s no more air in my lungs.
I drown in my sorrows tonight...

Side note: I wrote this after a close friend died. I write the best when I'm upset... I really am a happy person though ;) Let me know what you think!

no1phD's photo
Sun 03/16/14 04:57 PM
.. makes me want to throw you a life preserver..hmm.. its good.. it describes your pain. your loss... happy and sad.. yep you're normal..lol.. welcome..2m2..

32shadesofcray's photo
Sun 03/16/14 05:05 PM

.. makes me want to throw you a life preserver..hmm.. its good.. it describes your pain. your loss... happy and sad.. yep you're normal..lol.. welcome..2m2..


Thanks! Your life preserver comment made me laugh :D

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Sun 03/16/14 05:26 PM
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