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Edited by
FLIGHTPHOENIX
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Sun 02/02/14 03:14 AM
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"Just trying to find the right road in a world full of one-way streets"
I didn't think it was possible to feel this empty, this lost. So many ways to go, but no-one there, nothing but darkness. This is what broken feels like. I thought i was doing the right thing, but when i look back all i was doing was walking an endless road. Have you ever laid awake in bed wondering" Whats the point in sleeping?' Because you know that when you wake up that nothing is going to have changed. The final chapter is done, the book is complete, what a sad ending for someone so unique. |
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Again I love your poem. All this sadness but I suppose that's life,
and like I say in one of my poems, "The only thing to do is put a smile on it all," and thats what I do. |
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thank you an welcome to mingle
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That's a touching one, I believe it's not every man's wish to take the road of darkness when there's light to brighten life.
I love the poem cause it has a lot to say. Live the life you love and love the life you live Beautiful <(:(((<<<< |
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That's a touching one, I believe it's not every man's wish to take the road of darkness when there's light to brighten life. I love the poem cause it has a lot to say. Live the life you love and love the life you live Beautiful <(:(((<<<< |
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That's a touching one, I believe it's not every man's wish to take the road of darkness when there's light to brighten life. I love the poem cause it has a lot to say. Live the life you love and love the life you live Beautiful <(:(((<<<< |
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I really loved.. this...brings out the meaning well!!!!
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I really loved.. this...brings out the meaning well!!!! |
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"Life is not for the faint of heart" ....(((Phoenix)))...
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I really like this one.
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Im on the road to nowhere
Moving slow Im on the road to nowhere Just passed go Ive just passed go But Im moving slow My heart tells me no Theres nowhere to go |
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"Life is not for the faint of heart" ....(((Phoenix)))... |
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nice one big up to you well written
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nice one big up to you well written |
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is that whats meant by chillin out .. lol.. nice write ..
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A man is only one of a kind in his own mind. But sadly he can'��t outrun his own thoughts. At the time when he believes he'��s finished. That will be the beginning |
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Your poem was very touching. It gives meaning to the song... "Is that all there is?"
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It reminds me of my insomnia and i don't mean that in a bad way.
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thank you everyone for you kind words....
The struggles of life can pull you one direction, then another, and Behind every face is something. Behind mine is something no one can understand. So all I can do is smile and laugh the Days will pass and turn into years. But I will remember you Not angry. Just disappointed. Maybe a little angry and when i see the amount of time I've wasted liking you it's not worth wasting my time on people who don't bother with me unless they want something The new chapter has started, new book, what a good start for someone so unique. |
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