Topic: Illusions of You
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Sun 09/09/07 10:15 PM
We all carry lies,
emotional walls high,
misguided deceptions,
our own perceptions,
in all manners, all forms.
We patent our own agendas,
create our own illusions,
to show the outside.
Our barricades keep us untouched,
unseen, hidden,
so alone ... so apart..
You say,
“I want to know someone ...
... someone I don't have to lie to”
There's no need to lie,
no need to hide.
Crash those walls,
wave your flags,
the colors you've hidden,
so well ...
Scream who you are,
what you have been,
and all you will be ...
Look in my eyes,
drop that disguise,
Your camouflaged needs,
no longer exist.
I see through you.
Your flaws radiate.
Your silenced fears,
scream in my ears.
Your insecurities,
your cracked perfections
crystal, clear as an uncut diamond.
All these things I see,
with such clarity.
And you,
flawed and cracked,
are a vision far more
beautiful to me ...
far more real ...
... than illusions of you ...

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Sun 09/09/07 10:47 PM
I think it should be made a permanant posting.Isn't that what most of us are here for?To find that special someone they can relate to?That poem is an excellent example of how a lot of people really feel.

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Sun 09/09/07 11:19 PM
WOW, YOU MSWIZARD HAVE A bad fan CLUB,,lol
Your poem here was checked for deletion because THEY SAID multible postings of this POEM,,,WHAT?????? HELLO?????

I am just telling you it was up for deletion and I can't see where it has been posted multible times,,,YOU have had 3 or 4 poems posted but """PEOPLE""" THEY were different POEMS,,,for stupid sakes,,,,lol sorry,,,

YOUR POEM HERE ROCKS,,,and I LOVE IT....keep smiling,:heart:

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Mon 09/10/07 03:31 AM
I hope this poem DOESN'T get deleted MsWizard!! It was AWESOME...I loved it!! flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Mon 09/10/07 05:05 AM
WIZARD, IF U SEE FLAWS WITH GREEN EYES, THEY LOOK BEAUTIFUL TOOflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Mon 09/10/07 09:26 AM
"I think it should be made a permanant posting.Isn't that what most of us are here for?To find that special someone they can relate to?That poem is an excellent example of how a lot of people really feel."

Thank you defulk.......flowerforyou

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Mon 09/10/07 09:27 AM
"WOW, YOU MSWIZARD HAVE A bad fan CLUB,,lol
Your poem here was checked for deletion because THEY SAID multible postings of this POEM,,,WHAT?????? HELLO?????

I am just telling you it was up for deletion and I can't see where it has been posted multible times,,,YOU have had 3 or 4 poems posted but """PEOPLE""" THEY were different POEMS,,,for stupid sakes,,,,lol sorry,,,

YOUR POEM HERE ROCKS,,,and I LOVE IT....keep smiling, "
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Well iam4u, apparently people CAN'T read since I have NEVER posted this poem before......Thanks for sticking up for it! flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Mon 09/10/07 09:29 AM
"Mon 09/10/07 03:31 AM
I hope this poem DOESN'T get deleted MsWizard!! It was AWESOME...I loved it!!"


Debbie if this poem got deleted, I'd leave the site permanently. I dont believe in nazi thinking and if someone wanted this deleted for any reason, they'd sure better come up with a better UNTRUTH than "multiple postings" PARTICULARLY since this poem has NEVER been posted here until now! flowerforyou

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Mon 09/10/07 09:29 AM
"Mon 09/10/07 05:05 AM
WIZARD, IF U SEE FLAWS WITH GREEN EYES, THEY LOOK BEAUTIFUL TOO"



Frankflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Mon 09/10/07 09:30 AM
Bravo My friend,,, Most awesome work,,,
Its nice to wake up and see your soul so beautifully set in motion,,, flowerforyou :heart:

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Mon 09/10/07 09:31 AM
Thank you my sweet friend.....the mine is always churning isnt it? flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou