THE DANGER WITHIN
I ran to the Door as she hit the Floor
Lying so still i didn't know what to Do
I ran to her Side and there i Cried
Blood ran into her eyes of Blue
As i lifted her Head i knew she was Dead
My hate inside for him began to Grow
I lay her Aside my anger i could not Hide
Why did you kill mommy i wanted to Know
When i called you Dad it used to make me so Glad
Now that word makes me only want to Kill
In your closet i got your Gun and thru the house i began to Run
The more i ran the more anger i could Feel
Passed out on your Bed i put the gun to your Head
Mom gave her life protecting me from the danger Within
But to my head i put the gun Instead pulled the trigger and now i lay Dead
and next time your drunk you wont have a family to beat Again
james covington

Ohhh wow...

Yes I guess it is kinda dark...But I LOVED it!!! I write poems myself and I thought this was excellent!!

Yeah that was pretty deep,but well written.We hear so much of that,I only hope it does not hold true for you.

Without the dark we would never know the light.



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oh wow hun, that was deep but good

I couldn't think of anything but wow, either. What a visual.