Topic: Among the sheets (more erotic poetry) | |
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Edited by
JRonin
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Mon 09/30/13 11:16 PM
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Post-coital euphoria hits
we lay on our backs staring at the ceiling flushed perspiring replete and desiring more I turn my head to you our eyes lock as we catch our breath your leg is wrapped in mine my arm touches your back fingers playing on your slender spinal column making you tingle slightly you couldnt keep the smile off your face if you tried and you don't want to. You close your eyes and breathe taking in my manly scent as i take in your matted hair covered in sweat your exquisite body glistening. you have never looked more radiant in the coming sunrise of the morning the minutes tick by and we stay in this position wordless and quiet yet no words need be spoken until you move your mouth to mine kiss my lips in a fervent soft passion making me breathless once again, and utter the phrase "do it all over again." we spend the time following your excellent advice as the morning suns shines in the sky as your moans of ecstacy heighten with every kiss, every breath, every stroke of my fingertips tingling on your nude skin soon you are unable to keep still shaking trembling quivering eyes squeezed shut mouth parted and gasping every few seconds your glowing again heaven has arived and you greet it with a sensual fervor that curls your toes, tenses every muscle and warms you to the core vibrating you for what seems to go on for minutes on end! This is the time we spend together and just when you think you've had enough I lay you on your back and duck under the blankets and work at parts below making your eyes widen, making you fist the sheets again and reminding you of that divine place where only sensual angels tread and float. Among the attraction, among two people, among the sheets I take you. And for just this night and morning, your dreams are made real for however long you dare to stay with me tonight. (Thanks for reading. Please leave a comment or two) |
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Lovely a pleasure to read you again
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Lovely a pleasure to read you again The pleasure is mine, as well. always good to share my words with the world and get positive feedback. |
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Sensual, exciting, everything a poem should be!
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Breathless!
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well just RAWR..loved it.
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tell your friends, i could use the praise to boost my ego
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adding to my repertoire of writings at least once a week or every few days. Thanks for all the feedback guys, I really enjoy it.
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Wow is it hot in here or is it just me....Think I need a cigarette after reading that one and I don't smoke anymore...Your words capture the soul and lets the mind wonder~~~~
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Wow is it hot in here or is it just me....Think I need a cigarette after reading that one and I don't smoke anymore...Your words capture the soul and lets the mind wonder~~~~ Absolutely exquisite! |
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Edited by
JRonin
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Sun 10/20/13 06:57 PM
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Wow is it hot in here or is it just me....Think I need a cigarette after reading that one and I don't smoke anymore...Your words capture the soul and lets the mind wonder~~~~ Absolutely exquisite! Some people talk a good game about how they are in bed. I fantasize with my artistic indulgences. |
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Very nice I was there once keep writing
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Superb poem... lover's language...Great
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Wow! I need a cold shower after reading that!
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How exotic is that!
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thanks.
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that was ..... wow, can't come up wit anything. that good.
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that was ..... wow, can't come up wit anything. that good. Perhaps you will when inspiration hits, my friend. |
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Haha too late for a cold shower for me (blush)
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Haha too late for a cold shower for me (blush) |
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