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Don't know if I should change anything..or add anything..please let me know what you think...
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Your profile statements are very honest so that is good. Tell what type of person you are interested in personality wise. The only thing I would change are the pictures. You could add more that show your facial features.
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Thank you I will defiantly add more...
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I updated my profile I'm sure it still needs more work
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Edited by
Usnooze_Ulose
on
Thu 09/26/13 11:46 AM
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Hi Kim. Crop your photos before posting them. Otherwise they give the impression that you took very little time or care when creating your profile. Also, I would not mention about being needy in your heading. Your headline should be direct and to the point. Perhaps something like:
Love to be passionate with my lady! Obviously you are a very loving woman. Dont be afraid to express your wonderful quality! How far (in distance) are you willing to go to see a woman? You might want to mention that. Dont complain about the lack of partners in your area. Dont complain about anything here. I dont know much about girl love, but did you mention if you prefer being the butch? Perhaps your hairstyle indicates this, I dont know. You have excellent potential. Be more positive in your text. Also you mention that you enjoy both men and women, and then you go on to explain that you are really looking for a woman. You might briefly mention that you are bi, instead of writing it all out that you like both men and women, and then go on to explain the availability of men and women in your area. Forget all that. Be concise. And write to your prospective female lover right off the bat. Ie., Hi, I am looking for a woman between the ages of x and y to love and go crazy on. Something like that. Right off the bat. Dont make them read a whole paragraph just to find out who you are looking for. I hope this helps. Hugs |
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