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Topic: ~ pleasures
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Mon 08/05/13 08:29 AM
like the scent
of a forgotten
once adored
perfume
may pleasures
of this world
be yours and mine
its not always right
its not always wrong
its not always perfect
yet
its a moment closer
with you
than without you
tommyboy1101's photo
Mon 08/05/13 08:33 AM
teasing,

One senses your depth in this one. You're deep, tease, very deep. You're emotions are showing here. I feel as though I could just reach right out and pet them, and you my friend. This is a very pretty poem. Yes, I'll pet ye, Baby.

I'll pet ye! :heart:

tommy boy

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Mon 08/05/13 09:22 AM
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Mon 08/05/13 10:13 AM
:heart: lovely TB
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Mon 08/05/13 02:12 PM
flowers flowers flowers
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Mon 08/05/13 02:15 PM
Very nice! flowerforyou
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Mon 08/05/13 02:25 PM
A love song, that's what this is...:heart:
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Mon 08/05/13 05:06 PM
tommy boy.......i'm happy with these words i find from you,that you can sense my emotion in this write...thankyou,kindsir.
hippie..flowerforyou
pennyg...you are all heart..flowerforyou
tazzops..flowerforyou
Quizee...thankyou,flowerforyou
Vicki...you may be right...happy to see you here..:heart:
:heart:
teasing.
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Tue 08/06/13 01:51 PM
such a gift you have..a gift that keeps us in sweet morsels and pearls.
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Wed 08/07/13 07:41 AM
S......& I thankyou for the sweet words...
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Thu 08/08/13 05:39 AM
Teasing, again, this is exceptionally moving. I like the **** outa this one.
My best. Continue on with your work. I AM following you, my warm friend.

tommy boy, Thurs. Aug. 8th, 2013 / Ireland

:heart: Cyn - forever!

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Thu 08/08/13 12:40 PM
my humble gratitude for the praise.flowerforyou

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