theres a place we call home
where youll never be alone
its right below the heart
where a child dreams start
within your mothers womb
so safe in your room
just outside of her love
the endless stars above
froze to see your face
and touch this world with grace

theres a place we call love
where youll akways rise above
its deep within your heart
where shadows break apart
within your fathers mind
as safe a place youll ever find
just outside the door
every ocean shore
longs to be set free
by your eyes of affinity

Good write, very cool!

very nice - I like it

So enjoyed.heartfelt

Very nice

..woow nice ,, ,,love you tang and ma ,,miss my parents

Hey, Flech!..it's been a while and i missed you...but this made up for the time gone bye...
You're really good at this,.thank you for coming back and sharing...

charming.

Hey Boy Wonder! ...Good to see you!!... it's been too long!...Very nice!!

thanks to all for the support and good luck to all your dreams in the days to come

Hey awesome poem bro, I especially like the lines about the stars froze to see your face, That makes so much sense to me on so many levels! Great job!!

Hey thnks for your always ever kind words just thought id say my son was born a few days ago amd i think im going to publish a book how have u been