I need people to rate my profile because I need to see if I need to change how I wrote about myself.

Hi lookfun78,

Pretty good profile. The photo is clear enough and well lit and the description looks honest and easy enough to read. You made some weird typos in the text, like "I likes a lot of what life has to offers." Was that supposed to be folksy or something? Not sure.

Also, you could do without some of the negativity. For many of the things you dislike or hate, it might be better to leave them unsaid. Putting all that emphasis on Asians is a little weird, too. I can't say for sure, but I'd imagine that that line, as well as the one about obese women makes you look a little creepy.

You could fix your profile pic by snapping a photo where you're actually looking into the lens of the camera, and not cropping off the top of your head. Do yourself a favor: Put on a nice shirt, center your face in the photo, look into the lens and smile before snapping it. Otherwise, I can tell that you're a good-looking young man, so you should be fine, and all my advice here, is really just nit-picking. Good job. I rate your profile 7/10.

Good luck!