Topic: Hello
hopken45's photo
Thu 03/28/13 01:47 PM
Please rate my profile. Thanks :-)

Mortman's photo
Thu 03/28/13 10:39 PM
I like the text, but not the picture.

Your photo is tragic. Your face all in shadow, unflattering angle. The other pictures, your facing off to the right (your left) which makes you look disconnected.

It's good to show the face, but you should face the light and look into the camera. Also, there are a lot of women that like the idea of riding a motorcycle, so why not a shot of you on a big, shiny Harley, showing your prospective dates where they could be sitting (wind in their hair and all!). I think that'd be golden!

The text is a good description of yourself. Brief, evocative, and easy to get. You might also add whom you seek. If you have a type in mind, anyway. Maybe include something about what you'll expect. You could throw in "must like motorcycles" or "I want a good-looking woman who'll ride on the back of my bike or beside me on hers own." Just an idea, there.

Good luck!