Topic: please rate my profile
samhell's photo
Wed 02/06/13 01:00 AM
im new here and i would really like to know if my profile is ok.I know a good profile is very important because its the first impresion.I thank you for all that give me a honest suggestion

Littleman424's photo
Wed 02/06/13 06:47 AM
Well, I,m not very good at all this, so would be nice to get some responses?

Mortman's photo
Thu 02/07/13 07:36 PM
Your profile could be better.

Your default profile pic, in the sun and with sunglasses on, hides your eyes, makes your hair look stringy, dirty, sweaty and you look grumpy. The ladies might like the 2nd pic more--the one with the nice smile in the ball cap, showing your eyes. You could keep the first pic in the collection though because it shows you're outdoorsy.

Your description text is pretty good, but you could fix it, some. It does a good job of describing you and what you want, but it's all just one big, block of text.

You could probably inject some white space. If you really did mean that to be one big paragraph, then you might break it up into smaller chunks. Also check your punctuation.

I'm just a guy, though, so can't definitely say what the ladies think. Hope that helps.

Otherwise, good job!