Topic: knowing me
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Sun 12/30/12 06:15 AM
In silent times i stray in thought ...of all the moments my life's brought ...most of these thoughts reflect on you..The love we had when Just us two...I carry on damaged through most normal days...Your echo's still haunt me in feverish ways....Escaping your memory is hard from within....I stubble and fall each time i begin....I have to break free from these emotional ties ...Have to find closure from your treacherous lies...I hate that you still have power inside me....How can i fight you when i'm my own enermy...This pain in my heart is constant and clear....Intruding inside me and feeding my fear...This poison you gave me with passionate deceat... has stopped me from living i Die at your feet.ByRIC

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Sun 12/30/12 07:44 AM

of all the moments my life's brought...

most of these thoughts reflect on you..

The love we had when Just us two...

I carry on damaged through most normal days...

Your echo's still haunt me in feverish ways....

I have to break free from these emotional ties...

I hate that you still have power inside me....

How can i fight you when i'm my own enermy...

This poison you gave me with passionate deceat...

has stopped me from living i Die at your feet.ByRIC


Hello, ricstar... welcome to the writer's forum... I can feel the passion and pain in your work... and still the longing... and the self sacrifice... very potent stuff here... good write... flowerforyou