Topic: Two friends dead
lookin4home's photo
Mon 09/24/12 09:23 PM
Edited by lookin4home on Mon 09/24/12 09:25 PM
Two friends dead
Both from OD
Gun to my head
Wishing it were me
I got them hooked
Only I got free
Two friends dead
Wishing it were me

Two friends dead
They died at the scene
Out getting drunk
Wishing it were me
I could have driven instead
Too caught up in the scene
Two more friends dead
Wishing it were me

Four friends dead
Thought the rule was three
Blaming myself
For what I didn't see
Little did I know
What was in store for me
Four friends dead
Wishing it were me

Two more dead
Grandfathers gripped in disease
Smoking my cigarette
Wishing it were me
The rule held true
Six divided by two is three
Six friends dead
Wishing it were me

Six friends dead
They left without me
Tears in my eyes
Wishing it were me
Having trouble coping
With all these foul deeds
They're all gone now
And I wish it was me

Ladywind7's photo
Mon 09/24/12 10:35 PM
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bastet126's photo
Tue 09/25/12 04:11 PM
really enjoyed the writing style lookin4, and the hook
'wishing it were me'... :)