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Topic: Web of Weaves
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Tue 09/11/12 12:38 PM
My heart is nothing but a cascade
full of broken dreams
my life is nothing but a cascade
full of shattered hopes
my heart was a cascade full of love
but alas it was robbed

I am nothing but a cascade full of misery
i have nothing but a cascade full of sorrow
all i had asked for a small cascade of love and care
alas all i got was a cascade full of treachery



hope its good really had to rattle my brain to write it

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Tue 09/11/12 12:39 PM
My heart is nothing but a cascade
full of broken dreams
my life is nothing but a cascade
full of shattered hopes
my heart was a cascade full of love
but alas it was robbed

I am nothing but a cascade full of misery
i have nothing but a cascade full of sorrow
all i had asked for a small cascade of love and care
alas all i got was a cascade full of treachery



hope its good really had to rattle my brain to write it

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Tue 09/11/12 12:54 PM

My heart is nothing but a cascade
full of broken dreams
my life is nothing but a cascade
full of shattered hopes
my heart was a cascade full of love
but alas it was robbed

I am nothing but a cascade full of misery
i have nothing but a cascade full of sorrow
all i had asked for a small cascade of love and care
alas all i got was a cascade full of treachery



hope its good really had to rattle my brain to write it


I really liked that it would of tooken me
longer to come up with a cascade one lol

I liked that it was cool and neatly well done
whats my word ....hope its a easy one lol
if not pinches u across the miles lol

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Tue 09/11/12 01:03 PM
i didnt hope it wad good hehe well ur word is hmmm faith i hope its easy to write on :)

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Tue 09/11/12 01:16 PM
I like reading what you come up with
and my word is faith ...Hmmph

Faith...
When im cold faith wraps me in comfort
when im alone and desolate amongst
ragged edges of a bitter shore
there is faith..

When the emptyness echos my name
and life seems to fade as i slip away
there is faith..

The moment where the silence
feels like endless screams
there is faith..

Rattles rattles shakes and
shakes your brain lol

Your word is Grace but you
can do one on faith if you want to
cause id like to hear what you
say about faith since i had a hard time
with it .



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Tue 09/11/12 02:19 PM
To one and all. drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Tue 09/11/12 02:25 PM

To one and all. drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


drinker :thumbsup: drinks

Thank you ,Thank you
Nice to see you hope your days nice

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Tue 09/11/12 02:29 PM


To one and all. drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


drinker :thumbsup: drinks

Thank you ,Thank you
Nice to see you hope your days nice
They are indeed dear lady. Thank you for your words here in this forum.

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Tue 09/11/12 08:51 PM
sorry i fell asleep grace hmm ill start writing now

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Tue 09/11/12 10:20 PM
Faith is nothing but a mere belief
that separates the heavenly from the humans
it is a gift which only few recieve
it is like a ray of hope in the
darkest of times and it is like
the light at the end of the tunnel
where all hopes die faith rises
like a knight on a quest riding to
conquer all fears
faith is a gift which not everone recieves
it is nothing but a belief
its a gift of a kind
given by god to mankind

i hope its at least at par grace ill have to think a lot more to write on

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Wed 09/12/12 03:19 AM
Great writes.....drinker
Flames of poetic inspiration, and artistic license....smokin

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Wed 09/12/12 05:21 AM
Awesome writes both of you. I love the word game idea.flowerforyou

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Wed 09/12/12 06:33 AM
thanks sooo much really appreciate the views and let me know where i can improve so ill try and write much better

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