Topic: Bittersweet
JamieRawxx's photo
Sat 06/09/12 06:24 PM
I love that you heal me, but hate that you're broken
i wish i could help, you know that i am open
if you could have faith in me, you would see
i could heal you, like you've healed me
i just want one chance, that's all i need
but i wont beg and i wont plead
cause you're weak, kinda like me
can't let people control your emotions
love is just chemicals, just potions
i don't know a better way to express myself
than to write this down, and let it out
I just want you to be happy, without a doubt
but it's crazy, the way i feel
cause i don't know you, is it real?
but i want you to see
I am real, with real feelings
and everything i have said, i meant
i must sound like a lunatic
seriously, who is this bit*h?
but, you should have no doubt about me now
your'e my friend first, even if it hurts
this is the last i will say it
I, You, what's the word that is missin?

Totage's photo
Sat 06/09/12 06:25 PM
Jamie! Nice write, and nice to see you back. How you been?

JamieRawxx's photo
Sat 06/09/12 06:30 PM

Jamie! Nice write, and nice to see you back. How you been?


Thankyou, thankyou. I have been surviving. How are you?

Totage's photo
Sat 06/09/12 06:32 PM
Pretty much the same. lol

I like the new pic, BTW.

JamieRawxx's photo
Sat 06/09/12 06:45 PM

Pretty much the same. lol

I like the new pic, BTW.

Thank You flowerforyou

Totage's photo
Sat 06/09/12 06:50 PM
YW :)

pennyg281's photo
Sun 06/10/12 01:12 AM
Nice write Jamie . . .I love the passion you put into your poems. Great nee pic. flowerforyou

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Sun 06/10/12 04:05 AM
drinker

JamieRawxx's photo
Sun 06/10/12 01:31 PM
Thankyou guys so much! you give me the courage to share my emotions. flowerforyou flowerforyou

Totage's photo
Sun 06/10/12 01:48 PM
Keep sharing. :)

bastet126's photo
Mon 06/11/12 04:40 PM
i love the opening line, just powerful and sets the stage for the rest, really nice jamie :)