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Topic: Rate Me :)
fearthephoenix Joined Fri 04/20/12 Posts: 5	Mon 04/23/12 08:38 PM Edited by fearthephoenix on Mon 04/23/12 08:41 PM
New to this, so help me out! Helpful feedback would include what you think I'm looking for and type of person I'm trying to attract. Want to see if I'm in the ballpark. Can't give everything away, must remain somewhat mysterious

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Mon 04/23/12 08:39 PM
I think you're looking for fear... of the phoenix.

singmesweet Joined Mon 07/28/08 Posts: 26661	Mon 04/23/12 08:45 PM
It's a good start. The first line is a bit cheesy. I'd fix the sideways picture and check it over for spelling/punctuation errors, though.

fearthephoenix Joined Fri 04/20/12 Posts: 5	Mon 04/23/12 09:34 PM
I blame mingle for the picture. I've rotated photo, reuploaded 3 times... it likes me sideways o_O

IndigoIllusions Joined Sun 05/25/08 Posts: 5625	Mon 04/23/12 09:45 PM
I agree...it looks pretty good so far. I would take out the part about it being 9 months since your last relationship though, and the looking for 2 +/- pertaining to the age requirements. Don't limit yourself so tightly, you could miss out on some really wonderful people that might come your way. Hello and welcome.

fearthephoenix Joined Fri 04/20/12 Posts: 5	Wed 04/25/12 09:32 PM
I agree...it looks pretty good so far. I would take out the part about it being 9 months since your last relationship though, and the looking for 2 +/- pertaining to the age requirements. Don't limit yourself so tightly, you could miss out on some really wonderful people that might come your way. Hello and welcome. Advice taken and implemented!

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